Question

在生活中，你或者你的朋友都有可能遭遇過(guò)這樣的尷尬：年長(zhǎng)的人不能理解或誤解你們這一輩比較流行的文化現(xiàn)象，比如說(shuō)：“快閃（flash mob）”。請(qǐng)你就此“generation gap”的現(xiàn)象由此展開(kāi)想像或結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 你的這次被誤解的具體經(jīng)歷；2、你當(dāng)時(shí)的心情； 3、你如何向長(zhǎng)輩解釋清楚你的“古怪”行為。

注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120；

      2、不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

      3、“快閃”只是提供一個(gè)例子，你可以自由地選取任何“流行文化現(xiàn)象”進(jìn)行描述

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version:

Last year, my school club was putting on a cosplay show on the campus, and I was given an important role. Thrilled as I was, I tried not to tell my family about what was going on, which was actually quite natural for a boy in his “rebellious period”. After getting home from school, I went straight into my room and tried my costume on quietly. When I was making myself up, I got so concentrated that I didn’t hear my grandfather who was asking me to dinner. Much to my surprise, he suddenly opened my door and came in, and it didn’t take long for him to get totally shocked. For what seemed an eternity, the two of us stood in stunned silence, not knowing what to say. Imagine his dismay when he saw me dressed up like a madman!

We both tried to avoid each other later that day, and I could tell he was more than angry. Even my parents put some pressure on me. I didn’t know what to do at first, because I thought he was overreacting—I was just preparing for the show!

I got a little depressed for a while, but realizing it couldn’t solve the problem, I tried to help them understand what cosplay was all about. I didn’t go up close to my grandfather right away. Instead, I went to my parents first. With their support and help, my grandfather finally gave credit to what I was doing. After all, it’s communication that matters.

【解析】

試題分析：本文主要提及的是“代溝”的話題，這一話題是很多人都很熟悉的。考生可以用自己身邊發(fā)生的事情來(lái)距離說(shuō)明“generation gap”的存在。如“快閃”。在舉例的時(shí)候可以使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)等。要靈活運(yùn)用。要點(diǎn)：1. 你的這次被誤解的具體經(jīng)歷；2、你當(dāng)時(shí)的心情； 3、你如何向長(zhǎng)輩解釋清楚你的“古怪”行為。

    寫(xiě)作時(shí)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)知識(shí)，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點(diǎn)完整地表述出來(lái)，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語(yǔ)言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡(jiǎn)潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時(shí)應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過(guò)渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫(xiě)情況，有無(wú)拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，比如put on，make up，to one’s surprise，it takes sb. some time to do，dress up，put pressure on sb.，prepare for，solve the problem，get up close to；還運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯concentrate，eternity，stunned silence，overreacting，credit等等，高級(jí)句型which引導(dǎo)的非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞作狀語(yǔ)。并注意了句子的銜接如：after，when，so … that …，because等等。

考點(diǎn)：話題作文