Question

Bl短文改錯[20巧'黑龍江省鶴崗一中高一期中]

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，

每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

      2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear Zhou Lu,

I，m writing a letter ask you for some help.As you know, Zhang Fei and I used to be good friend. However, on one day, Zhang Fei read my private letter in secret and tell others what was written in it. Knowing this, I was extreme angry. I told her I would not be his friend any more. Hearing what I said, Zhang felt very surprised and no longer stayed with me. Face with this, I felt very upset. I am very angry with her improper behaviour, but I can't forget a wonderful time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with her, she will refuse me. How should I do?

                   Your friend, Li Hua

Answer 1

   短文改錯

Dear Zhou Lu,

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stayed with me.   Face with this, I felt very upset. I am very an-Faced

gry with her improper behaviour, but I can't forget  a wonderful

the

time that I stayed with her. I wonder whether I should forgive when

her. And I'm afraid if I offer to make friends with her* she will

refuse me.  How should I do? What

Your friend, Li Hua