Question

【題目】請(qǐng)閱讀下面圖畫(huà)及文字,并按照要求用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇150詞左右的文章。

［寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容］

1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上面圖文所反映的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

2.談?wù)勛鹬厮�人的重要性�?/span>

3.舉例說(shuō)明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。

（寫(xiě)作要求）

1. 寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中不能直接引用原文語(yǔ)句；

2. 作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng);

3.不必寫(xiě)標(biāo)題。

［評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］

內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，語(yǔ)篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當(dāng)。

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Answer 1

【答案】People treat others differently. In Picture 1, a lady frowns at the cleaner, hurriedly off in disgust, while Picture 2 shows a man politely presents a flower to the cleaner and praises her sincerely. (34w)

Respecting others, undoubtedly, is what we should value when getting along with others. Quite a few things give rise to this. Firstly, it is imperative for us to cultivate and develop this traditional and treasurable quality, which can not only mirror our excellent character but also demonstrate our recognition of others. Secondly, only when we respect others can we earn respect from others, thus paving way for a harmonious social environment.

Personally, showing respect for others is always a principle I stick to. A warm smile or willingness to learn from others is what I always do to respect my parents, classmates and anyone regardless of their origins or status.

It blesses him who respect others, and him who is respected.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過(guò)審題我們可以確定幾個(gè)方面的信息。第一，1.用約30個(gè)詞概括上面圖文所反映的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。

2.談?wù)勛鹬厮�人的重要性�?/span>

3.舉例說(shuō)明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。

第二，人稱(chēng)為第三人稱(chēng)。第三，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫(xiě)作段落數(shù)量為四段。第一段，用約30個(gè)詞概括上面圖文所反映的社會(huì)現(xiàn)象。第二段，談?wù)勛鹬厮�人的重要性。第三段，舉例說(shuō)明在生活中你是如何尊重他人的。第四段，總結(jié)。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語(yǔ): treat，frown，praise，presents a flower，get along with, give rise to，mirror our excellent character，demonstrate our recognition of others, regardless of.

第四步：確定較為高級(jí)的句子:what引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句Respecting others, undoubtedly, is what we should value when getting along with others. which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 Firstly, it is imperative for us to cultivate and develop this traditional and treasurable quality, which can not only mirror our excellent character but also demonstrate our recognition of others.不完全倒裝句Secondly, only when we respect others can we earn respect.

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過(guò)渡銜接:Firstly，Secondly，Personally.

第六步：注意書(shū)寫(xiě)，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。