Question

9．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
          2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I just come back from Britain last week．I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．We visited to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．I also liked Oxford，where I saw much more old buildings．The Lake District was beautiful，but it was pity that it rained heavily when they were there．The most exciting thing for me in Britain was what I made a lot of friends there．

Answer 1

分析 上周我從英國(guó)回來(lái)．我很幸運(yùn)成為參觀英國(guó)的學(xué)生之一．我們參觀了很多地方，倫敦，牛津，和大湖區(qū)．我學(xué)到了很多倫敦的歷史文化．我喜歡牛津，那里有很多古老的建筑．大湖區(qū)很美，可惜我們?nèi)サ臅r(shí)候下雨．最開心的是我在那交了很多朋友．

解答 I just come back from Britain last week．
         came
I was luckily enough to be one of the students from different country to visit the UK from Feb.16 to 28．
         lucky                                                                        countries
We visited to many places，like London，Oxford or the Lake District．
               去掉                                                  and
I learned much about British culture and history in London，where was my favorite．
                                                                                        which
I also liked Oxford，where I saw much more old buildings．
                                                many
The Lake District was beautiful，but it was∧pity that it rained heavily when they were there．
                                                               加a                                               we
The most exciting thing for me in Britain was what I made a lot of friends there．
                                                                  that
1．come改為came．文章講述的是過(guò)去的事情，要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
2．luckily改為lucky．句中l(wèi)ucky是作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，要用形容詞．
3．country改為countries．句意表達(dá)的是不同的國(guó)家，要用復(fù)數(shù)．
4．to去掉．visit是及物動(dòng)詞，后面不需要加介詞．
5．or改為and．句意表達(dá)的是并列，不是選擇．
6．where改為which．句中was my favorite是一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，從句缺少主語(yǔ)，要用關(guān)系代詞；句意指的是抽象名詞歷史文化，要用which來(lái)指代．
7．much改為many．句中修飾的是復(fù)數(shù)名詞buildings，要用many．
8．加a．固定搭配，it is a pity真遺憾．
9．they改為we．邏輯指代錯(cuò)誤，句意指代的是我們．
10．what改為that．句中I made a lot of friends there是作系動(dòng)詞的表語(yǔ)，是一個(gè)表語(yǔ)從句；從句結(jié)構(gòu)完整，表達(dá)的是一個(gè)事實(shí)，要用從屬連接that連接．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 短文改錯(cuò)題考查的是語(yǔ)境理解能力和用法基礎(chǔ)知識(shí)．�？嫉闹�識(shí)點(diǎn)有：名詞（單復(fù)數(shù)錯(cuò)誤），動(dòng)詞（時(shí)態(tài)，語(yǔ)態(tài)，搭配，轉(zhuǎn)換），代詞（指代錯(cuò)誤），形容詞和副詞（轉(zhuǎn)換，比較等級(jí)），連詞（and，but，or）等．偶爾也會(huì)考查邏輯錯(cuò)誤，如本來(lái)用her，卻用了his等等．解題是要注意：以句子為單位，以動(dòng)詞為中心．看句子要看完整，避免句子前后矛盾的錯(cuò)誤；找錯(cuò)誤要以動(dòng)詞為主，動(dòng)詞或與動(dòng)詞有關(guān)的錯(cuò)誤占了改錯(cuò)的題的重要一部分．