Question

14．假如你們班將要對(duì)"良好的飲食習(xí)慣"這一話題進(jìn)行討論．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列提示，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)應(yīng)包括：
1．同學(xué)中存在的一些不良的飲食習(xí)慣．
2．如何建立良好的飲食習(xí)慣．
3．個(gè)人看法．
注意：
1．發(fā)言稿必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮．
2．發(fā)言稿開(kāi)頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
詞數(shù)：120左右   
參考詞匯：偏食：be particular about    零食：snack
Dear classmates，
As we all know，it is very important for us to form healthy eating habits___________________________________________________________________________________
That's all．Thank you！

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類(lèi)作文，我們需要用正確的英語(yǔ)把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來(lái)．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Some of us often go to school without breakfast； some like to have snacks； some others are particular about food； and still some eat or drink too much．（高分句型一）句中使用了三個(gè)并列句；
To keep fit，we should have various healthy diets，which generally include proper amounts of fish，meat，vegetables，fruit as well as main food．（高分句型二）句中To keep fit作目的狀語(yǔ)，which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句
Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better．（高分句型三）only+狀語(yǔ)句子使用半倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

解答 As we all know，it's very important for us to form healthy eating habits．However，bad eating habits are still very common among us students．Some of us often go to school without breakfast； some like to have snacks； some others are particular about food； and still some eat or drink too much．（高分句型一） All these bad habits will surely do harm to our health．（不良的飲食習(xí)慣）
     To keep fit，we should have various healthy diets，which generally include proper amounts of fish，meat，vegetables，fruit as well as main food．（高分句型二）Besides，we'd better have meals regularly．（如何建立良好的飲食習(xí)慣）
     In my opinion，we should try to develop healthy eating habits to build up a strong body．Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better．（高分句型三）（個(gè)人看法）That's all．Thank you!

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類(lèi)作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．