Question

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假如你是李華，你所在的社區(qū)給每戶居民都發(fā)放了一張"鄰里互助卡"，居民互幫互助，互助卡架起了一座連心橋．請(qǐng)將這一情況反映給某報(bào)社，并發(fā)表自己的看法．
注意：（1）詞數(shù) 100左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
（2）不得在作文中提及任何考生個(gè)人信息
參考詞匯：互助卡 a help card  和諧的 harmonious   社區(qū) community 
Dear editor，
I am Li Hua，a senior middle school student．I'm glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card．
Recently，the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious．If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于圖畫(huà)類作文，根據(jù)提示信息你所在的社區(qū)給每戶居民都發(fā)放了一張"鄰里互助卡"，居民互幫互助，互助卡架起了一座連心橋．請(qǐng)將這一情況反映給某報(bào)社，并發(fā)表自己的看法，寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)，分別從不同觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來(lái)討論該話題．2、要根據(jù)圖畫(huà)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě)．本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)，就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：
（高分句型一）If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．
該句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；where引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句；
（高分句型二）If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it
該句使用了if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句；who引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，修飾先行詞a neighbor．

解答 Dear editor，
   I'm Li Hua，a senior middle school student． I'm glad to tell you that great changes have taken place in my community because of a help card．
   Recently，the relationship between the neighbors in my community is becoming more and more harmonious．（高分句型一）If you forget to bring keys，your neighbors will invite you to their homes，where you can wait and have a cup of tea．（高分句型二）If there is something wrong with your computer，you can call a neighbor who is good at repairing it，according to the information offered by the card．If you are ill，but you can't find a doctor at night，you can get help from the card．This is very useful，especially for the old left alone at home．
   I think if people can help each other，the world will be a better place to live in．Don't you think so？
                                                                                                                Yours faithfully，
                                                                                                                 Li Hua

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