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【題目】書面表達

如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語( quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。

“Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm.（熱情）”

－Sir Winston, Churchill

內(nèi)容要求：

1. 你對該引語的理解；

2. 你的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；

3. 恰當?shù)慕Y(jié)尾。

注意：

1. 短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；

2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)考生的具體信息；

3. 詞數(shù)：120左右。

This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that

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Answer 1

【答案】

This quotation from Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged right after failures. Rather, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures.

At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and better. Looking back, I feel I wouldn't be able to ride a bike had I lost heart.

Actually, we can’t succeed in everything we try. What’s important is that we should stick at it.

【解析】

試題分析：如何理解“成功”，不同的人有不同的看法。請認真閱讀下面的引語( quotation)，按要求用英語寫一篇短文。這種形式的寫作貼近學生生活，使他們感到熟悉。考生成文時應注意：1. 結(jié)構(gòu)上：采用三段成文，第一段引出話題，自己對于該引語的理解；第二段寫出自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷；第三段恰當?shù)亟Y(jié)尾。2. 時態(tài)：自己的相關(guān)經(jīng)歷用一般過去時；3. 人稱：第一人稱；4. 注意恰當使用一些連詞，使文章自然、流暢。5. 適當使用一些高級句型和詞匯以提高作文檔次。

【亮點說明】文章使用了很好的短語和句子：was about to快要，give up放棄，better and better越來越好，be able to能夠，lost heart灰心喪氣，succeed in成功，tells us that we shouldn’t get discouraged賓語從句，So excited was I that I couldn’t wait to try my hand at riding it倒裝句，I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going.這里含有一個時間狀語從句，What's important is that we should stick at it.這里含有一個主語從句和一個表語從句。文章還運用了However，Worse still等詞來連接全文。