【題目】假定你是李華，暑假期間去某個(gè)島上游玩，看見(jiàn)有很多可愛(ài)的動(dòng)物。聽(tīng)島上的一位老人說(shuō)，現(xiàn)在動(dòng)物的數(shù)量日漸減少，如果不采取措施，有些動(dòng)物會(huì)有絕跡的危險(xiǎn)�；貋�(lái)后你給野生動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)寫信，就保護(hù)動(dòng)物提出以下建議：

1. 制定保護(hù)動(dòng)物的法律

2. 建立動(dòng)物保護(hù)區(qū)

3. 提高公眾保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)

提示：提高---意識(shí)：raise one’s awareness 保護(hù)區(qū)：set up natural reserve

日漸減少 decrease year by year 處于滅絕的危險(xiǎn)be in danger of extinction

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：100詞左右；開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，該部分不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to express my opinion on how to protect animals on the island I visited last weekend.

______ _ ________

______ _ ________

______ _ ________

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】

Dear Sir/Madam,

I’m writing to express my opinion on how to protect the monkeys on the island I visited last weekend. The animals there are lovely, but it’s said that the number of them is decreasing year by year. If measures aren’t taken, they will be in danger of extinction.

As far as I’m concerned, laws concerning animal protection should be made to punish those illegal hunters. Besides, it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges. There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments are more likely to survive and reproduce. What’s more, something should be done to raise people’s awareness of protecting animals.

To sum up, protecting animals is of great urgency and it is vital for us to take steps to protect them.

Please help the poor animals. I am sure that they will survive with your help.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查開(kāi)放性作文寫作,開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題：給動(dòng)物保護(hù)協(xié)會(huì)寫信，提出一些保護(hù)動(dòng)物的建議，并有部分的文字提示。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章使用了很好的短語(yǔ)和句子：in danger of ，extinction滅絕，concern，reproduce，raise people’s awareness of 提升人們的意識(shí)，is of great urgency十分緊急等，it is advisable to set up natural reserves or refuges.，it is vital for us to take steps to protect them是用了形式主語(yǔ)，There is no doubt that animals living in safe environments運(yùn)用了There is no doubt that毫無(wú)疑問(wèn).....的句型。并且文章運(yùn)用了As far as I’m concerned，Besides，What’s more，To sum up等過(guò)渡性短語(yǔ)來(lái)使得文章的條理更加清晰。

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