Question

17．新學期你到一所新學校上學，這里的一切和你原來的學校相比有很多不同的地方，學校環(huán)境優(yōu)美，有很好的教學設施，還有足球場等，請以"My New School"為題，用英語寫一篇介紹學校的文章．
注意：詞數(shù)80-100個．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于開放式作文，根據(jù)提示信息寫一寫"My New School"，寫作時注意以下幾點：1、仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點：分別從學校環(huán)境優(yōu)美，有很好的教學設施，還有足球場等來進行描寫 2、按照一定邏輯關系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照地點方位的順序寫．3、根據(jù)要表達的內容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：
This term，I come to a new school，which is diffrent from my former school．（高分句型一）be different from與…不同；帶有which引導的定語從句
In the east is a teaching building in which the teachers are working．（高分句型二）本句使用了全倒裝；句中帶有介詞的定語從句
In the south of the school is our playground where we usually have PE lessons there，and we usually play basketball，soccer ball on the playground．（高分句型三）句中帶有where引導的定語從句

解答 This term，I come to a new school，which is diffrent from my former school．（高分句型一）There are tall buildings in our school．Our classroom building is in the north of the school．In the east is a teaching building in which the teachers are working．（高分句型二）On the second floor of the building there is a library，where we can find some useful books and we can read all kinds of books，newspapers and magazines，too．In the south of the school is our playground where we usually have PE lessons there，and we usually play basketball，soccer ball on the playground．（高分句型三） Sometimes we read books early in the morning there．In the middle of our school  is a garden，in which there are many kinds of flowers  and they come out in spring．（高分句型四）How beautiful our new school is!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．