2．請(qǐng)你修改下面短文，共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏子符號(hào)（∧）并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
  2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones．So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of．This change in communication have good effects on our works and life．Comparing with letters and public phones，mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient．If you missed your grandmother，you just take out your phone and say"hello"to him．And she will be happy to hear your voice．If you want to place order with a foreign company，you can e-mail the message．It'll be minutes after you get their reply．

分析 本文主要講述手機(jī)和因特網(wǎng)給我們的工作和生活帶來的好的影響．它們更快捷和更方便．比如和一家外國公司下訂單，使用電子郵件，幾分鐘便可得到回復(fù)．

解答 People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones．So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of．This change in communication have good effects on our works and life．Comparing with letters and public phones，mobile phones and the Internet arefast and much more convenient．If you missed your grandmother，you just take out your phone and say"hello"to him．And she will be happy to hear your voice．If you want to place∧order with a foreign company，you can e-mail the message．It'll be minutes after you get their reply．
詳解：
1．So改為But 考查連詞．前后兩個(gè)單句之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而非因果關(guān)系，用連詞but．
2．去掉of 考查詞語用法．instead意為"替代，頂替"，是副詞，instead of意為"（用…）代替…"，是介詞短語，此處應(yīng)是：替代，頂替．
3．have改為has 考查主謂一致．主語change是單數(shù)形式，謂語動(dòng)詞也應(yīng)用單數(shù)形式has．  
4．works改為work 考查名詞．work是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式．
5．Comparing改為Compared 考查過去分詞．mobile phones and the Internet與compare之間是動(dòng)賓關(guān)系，用過去分詞短語Compared with letters and public phones作狀語．
6．fast改為faster 考查形容詞比較級(jí)． and是并列連詞，它前后連接兩個(gè)相同的語法成分，faster和much more convenient都是形容詞比較級(jí)作并列表語．
7．missed改為miss 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)．本文講述的是一般事實(shí)，用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．
8．him改為her 考查代詞．her指代grandmother．
9．加an 考查冠詞．是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式前加不定冠詞表示泛指，因其讀音以發(fā)元音開頭，用不定冠詞an．  
10．a(chǎn)fter改為before 考查連詞．It+be+一段時(shí)間+before-clause此句型中的"一段時(shí)間"通常用long，years，weeks，days，hours，minutes等詞語表示．主句中的謂語動(dòng)詞為肯定形式時(shí)，意為"過一段時(shí)間才…"；主句中用will be時(shí)，before從句中常用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說明文，短文故事，書信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．

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