Question

最近，你校組織學(xué)生到農(nóng)村進(jìn)行一次社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，調(diào)查"富民政策"實(shí)施后，給農(nóng)村帶來的變化，下列四幅圖畫描繪丫你們?cè)谵r(nóng)村的所見所聞。請(qǐng)根據(jù)圖畫內(nèi)容，用英語寫一篇實(shí)踐活動(dòng)報(bào)告刊登在校報(bào)英語習(xí)作欄。

命題呈現(xiàn)

注意：

1.詞數(shù):120左右;

2.提示詞匯：富民政策rich-peasant policy;

3.運(yùn)用想象，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；

4.丹頭部分已給出，不計(jì)人總詞數(shù)。

Last weekend, our school organized a social activity.       

命寫作支招

一) 寫作定性

本文是一篇報(bào)道類的記敘文。具有取材來源于現(xiàn)實(shí)生活、描述直截了當(dāng)、敘事方式^為順敘、插敘和倒敘等特點(diǎn)。時(shí)態(tài)多為--般過去時(shí)，人稱多為第三人稱，句式多為含被動(dòng)語態(tài)的陳述句。全文一般分為"揭示活動(dòng)一描寫見聞一抒發(fā)感想"三段。

二) 難點(diǎn)突破

1.可用詞匯

carry out,put ... into practice, social activity, investigate, be covered with,be surrounded with，over the river, across the river，trees and flowers, wider road，environment, big houses， modern furniture, spiritual life, be equipped with, leisure, full of hope, hopeful, smile, live a ...life,energetic, far/much better, to one's surprise/joy/excitement

2.結(jié)構(gòu)模仿

揭示活動(dòng)(activity presentation) ：用一個(gè)復(fù)合句導(dǎo)出主題以使開頭簡(jiǎn)潔明了。Last Thursday we had a class meeting to discuss what we could do to help people protect the environment.

描寫見聞(knowledge description) ：充分運(yùn)用銜接過渡詞和其他連接手段以及名詞性從

句使行文連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊、層次分明。

While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and the beautiful view. How?ever,when we reached the top, what shocked us was that we saw litter here and there. 抒發(fā)感想(feeling expression) 用形容詞和副詞增強(qiáng)語言的表現(xiàn)力。The activity was tiring, but what we have learnt from it is quite valuable.

3.參考句型

sb. do sth. (in order) to…某人做某事以便… '

the purpose of doing sth. is to…做某事的0的是......

what surprise/impress sb. is that…讓某人驚訝/印象深刻的是......

as a result of sth.  +句子

Answer 1

  Last weekend, our school organized a social activity in the countryside to find out how much the countryside has changed since the " rich-peas?ant policy" was carried out in the country.

  Much to our joy，now the countryside takes on a new look both in living environment and mental outlook. Hills are covered with trees and gardens filled with flowers.   Rivers are clean with bridges over them,which makes the traffic very convenient. Peasants are living in the beautiful houses which are equipped with fine furniture.     What impressed us most is that the peasants are paying special attention to their cultural life. As a result of more money but less physical burden thanks to the scientific farming, they have more time for leisure. So people look more energetic and younger for their age.

  This activity was really a big surprise for us. What we saw in the countryside was far better than we had expected.