Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10 處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear editor，

I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays. I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason. First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot. What’s more, it is widely accepted that animal waste pollutes the environment, where makes people quite uncomfortable. Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. The mostly important is that pets can spread some diseases and this has attracted much attention. Take all these factors into consideration, I sincerely hope that I can get help from you and expect the media do something for this.

Yours truly,

Wang Lin

Answer 1

【答案】1. I really 前的and→ but

2. anything→ something

3. reason→ reasons

4. 去掉as后的it

5. trouble→ troubles

6. where→ which

7. place→ places

8. mostly→ most

9. Take→ Taking

10. do→ to do

【解析】第一處：考察連詞的應(yīng)用。根據(jù)“I’m sorry to occupy your precious time, and I really want to tell you anything about the problem of some people keeping too many pets nowadays.”句意：很抱歉出現(xiàn)在你忙的時(shí)間，但是無(wú)真的有事要告訴你。故and改為but。

第二處：考察不定代詞的應(yīng)用。在否定句中一些事情用anything，在肯定中用something�？芍�此句為肯定句，則用something。故anything改為something。

第三處：考察名詞復(fù)數(shù)的應(yīng)用。根據(jù)“I take the problem more and more seriously for the following reason.”more and more后應(yīng)跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。故reason改為reasons。

第四處：考察固定搭配的應(yīng)用。“First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot.”as is known to people大家都知道。故去掉as后的it。

第五處：考察名詞復(fù)數(shù)的應(yīng)用。“First of all, as it is known to people, pets make loud noise that trouble residents a lot.”a lot后跟名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。故trouble改為troubles。

第六處：考察定語(yǔ)從句關(guān)系代詞的應(yīng)用。此句非限定性定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞為事情，關(guān)系代詞在后面的句子中作主語(yǔ)。應(yīng)用which。故where改為which。

第七處：考察名詞復(fù)數(shù)的應(yīng)用。 Many owners like taking their pets to public place where they may frighten children or even bite people. 可知，此處應(yīng)為名詞的復(fù)數(shù)。故place改為places。

第八處：考察最高級(jí)的應(yīng)用。根據(jù)意思此處應(yīng)為形容詞的最高級(jí)。important的最高級(jí)應(yīng)在前面加most。故mostly改為most。

第九處：考察動(dòng)名詞的應(yīng)用。此處為動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)做狀語(yǔ)，前面應(yīng)該用take的名詞形式taking。故Take改為Taking。

第十處：考察固定搭配的應(yīng)用。expect to do sth希望做某事。故do改為to do。