Question

近年來中國中學生中出現了 “出國學習熱”，成千上萬的中學生已經去國外學習，而許多其他學生還一直在設法出國，對此人們有不同的看法。請根據下面表格提示，以Studying Abroad 為題寫一篇短文。

Advantages	Disadvantages
1. 與不同文化背景的人交友 2. 學習國外先進的科學技術 3. 更快地學習外語	1. 年紀小、缺乏生活經驗，自理能力差 2. 情感孤獨，思鄉(xiāng) 3. 生活和學習費用高
你 自 己 的 看 法

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點，內容連貫；
2．詞數；120左右；開頭已給出（不計入總詞數）。
要點提示：先進科學技術advanced knowledge of science and technology，生活經驗living experience
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study.

Answer 1

Studying   Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Tens of thousands of them have gone to foreign countries to study. Many more are trying their best to go abroad. As for this, different people have different opinions.
There are many advantages in studying abroad. First, students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures. Second, they can learn much more advanced knowledge of science and technology from foreign countries. Still, they can improve their foreign languages more quickly.
On the other hand, there are some disadvantages. Most of the students are too young to live by themse lves without any living experience. Moreover, being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick./ miss their families. And further, the high cost is also a problem for common families
In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.

試題分析：這是闡述優(yōu)缺點的議論文，話題是出國學習熱的問題。這種文章一般層次比較清晰，有總述；優(yōu)點和缺點以及自己觀點。要注意的是1.在列舉雙方依據時要盡量使語言多樣化；2.自我觀點表達時要有正確的判斷，要有辯證的思維。一篇文章需要有正確的句子才能明了清晰的表達作者的意思�？忌鷳�明白高考書面表達題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求的是將所規(guī)定的材料內容經整理后展開思維，考查運用所學英語知識準確地表達意思的能力�？忌鷳�該用自己最熟悉、最有把握的詞、短語及句式，按一定的邏輯順序和意義層次完成短文，劃分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之間的發(fā)展和連貫。盡量使用不同長度的句子，使句型多樣化。適當使用連詞，使句子間的銜接自然流暢。
【亮點說明】范文結構清晰，句式富于變化：students who study abroad can make friends with people of different cultures.這句話用了定語從句， Most of the students are too young to live by themselves without any living experience這句話用了too…to…結構， being far away from their motherland, they may eel lonely and homesick./ miss their families. 這句話用了非謂語動詞做狀語， In my opinion, it is advisable to take as many things into consideration .這句話用了it做形式主語，They can ask teachers or students who have studied abroad for advice and they should try to get everything ready before attending school abroad.這句話用了并列句和定語從句還有動名詞。還有范文使用了很多關聯詞，如First, Second, Still, On the other hand, . Moreover And further,使文章更加連貫。