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9．假設(shè)你是星光中學(xué)的李華，將參加主題為"Let's Ride Bicycles"的英語演講比賽．請撰寫一份演講稿，主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；
（2）騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康等．
參考詞匯：低碳生活（low-carbon life）；節(jié)能（energy saving）
注意：（1）詞數(shù)：120詞左右；
（2）演講稿開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，請將其抄寫在答題卡上且該部分不計入總詞數(shù)．
Good morning，everyone，
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"
As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．
There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on! 
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給要點寫一份演講稿．寫作要點：（1）目前汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題；（2）騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康．屬提綱作文．在寫作時人稱以第二和第三人稱為主．時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時．重要短語：due to…（由于…），It's high time that （該是做…的時候），Compared to…（與…比較），keep fit （保持健康…），cut down…（削減），have great effects on （對…有影響 ）．

解答 Good morning，everyone，
      I am Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is"Let's Ride Bicycles"．As is known to us，air pollution and heavy urban traffic are becoming increasingly severe mainly due to the overuse of cars．Therefore，it's high time we chose another better means of transport，which is cycling．【高分句型】（汽車帶來的空氣污染和交通堵塞等問題）
      There are many good reasons to ride bicycles．First of all，compared to cars，bicycles are much cheaper to buy and maintain，and you don't have all the added costs of fuel，and parking．【高分句型】What's more，bicycles are more environmentally friendly than cars，because they hardly make
noises and exhaust．Cycling has become a new trend around the world，a good way of energy saving and low-carbon life．Last but not least，cycling is an excellent way to keep fit and live longer．By riding bicycles，you can cut down your risk of heart attacks，high blood pressure and
other illnesses．So I think，riding bicycles actually has great effects on us．Let's ride bicycles from today on!（騎自行車的益處，如節(jié)能環(huán)保、有利健康）
 Thank you for listening!

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點．寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．