Question

12．五一小長假即將來臨，你班同學(xué)就五一假期計(jì)劃進(jìn)行討論，提出了不同看法，請根據(jù)提示寫一篇短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ?

	優(yōu) 點(diǎn)	缺 點(diǎn)
待在家中	花費(fèi)少、舒適方便	不能親身了解外界
外出旅游	增長知識、開闊眼界	花費(fèi)多、旅途不便

注意：
     1．詞數(shù)100左右（不含已寫好部分）．
     2．短文必須包括表中所列要點(diǎn)，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容分段表述．
     3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．參考詞匯：眼界horizon （view）
    The May Day is coming．Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday．                                                               

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
However，others prefer to ①go out for traveling since ②it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．
然而，其他人喜歡外出旅游，因?yàn)樗�可以增加他們的知識和擴(kuò)大視野．
①prefer to do意為：喜歡做某事．
②此處為連詞since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語從句．
句型二：
In my opinion①，it would be much better to ②stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as③reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．在我看來，待在家里會更好，因?yàn)槲铱梢宰鑫蚁矚g做的事，比如看書，看電視，幫父母做家務(wù)．
①In my opinion：依我看來，在我看來；常用來表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn)．
②It would be better to do sth：做某事會更好．
③such as表示舉例，意為"例如，諸如此類的，像…那樣的"，相當(dāng)于like或for example．

解答 The May Day is coming．Our class has a discussion about what to do during the holiday．Some are in favor of staying at home．They think it's both convenient and comfortable．What's more，they can save money for other purposes．（分析待在家中的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）But they will lose the chance of getting to know the outside world．（分析待在家中的缺點(diǎn)）However，others prefer to go out for traveling since it can increase their knowledge and broaden their horizons．【高分句型一】（分析外出旅游的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）But they will spend more money and meet some difficulties while traveling．（分析外出旅游的缺點(diǎn)）
In my opinion，it would be much better to stay at home，for I can do what I like，such as reading books，watching TV，and helping my parents with the housework．【高分句型二】（表達(dá)自己的看法）

點(diǎn)評 圖表類書面表達(dá)旨在考查學(xué)生運(yùn)用語言解決實(shí)際問題的能力，它需要考生通過觀察和分析圖表，提煉要點(diǎn)，然后組織表達(dá)材料；寫作時(shí)，除了要思路清晰，運(yùn)用恰當(dāng)?shù)木湫鸵约罢�確的時(shí)態(tài)，還應(yīng)對圖表的內(nèi)容做出總結(jié)或評價(jià)．