假定英語諏上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改，

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(^)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用（＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

On the first day when I went to high school，I felt exciting．After 9 years’study, I felt I was so closely to university．During the first year, I made many friends．I got to know all of my classmates．Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends．When second year came，I was arranged to other class．I was worried that no one could talk to me，but I made new friends quickly．Now that it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress．High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out．

1.exciting改為excited

2.closely改為close

3.Because改為Though/Although

4.sorrow with改為sorrow for

5.when second改為when the second

6.other class改為another class

7.it was改為it is

8.that 去掉

9.but改為and

10.out改為in

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯題。

1. felt exciting該句中主語為I。故exciting改為excited

2. close to：意為離...近。 I felt I was so closely to university句子so為副詞，用來形容形容詞close。故closely改為close

3. the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends應(yīng)理解為即使學(xué)業(yè)艱難，但我還是和同學(xué)分享喜怒哀樂，前后表轉(zhuǎn)折。故Because改為Though/Although

4. with改為sorrow for�？疾楣潭ù钆�。Because the school work was tough．I shared happiness and sorrow for my friends應(yīng)理解為即使學(xué)業(yè)艱難，但我還是和同學(xué)分享喜怒哀樂，share sth with sb：與...分享..。故將sorrow with改為sorrow for

5. second改為when the second�？疾樾驍�(shù)詞的用法。序數(shù)詞表示事物的順序，它一般跟定冠詞the一起出現(xiàn)在可數(shù)的單數(shù)名詞之前，When the second year came：意為第二年到了的時候。故when second改為when the second

6. class改為another class。考查other的用法，other表示其他的，通常與可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)連用，another表示三者或三者以上中的另外一個，通常與可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)連用。I was arranged to other class應(yīng)理解為我被安排到另外一個班級。故other class改為another class

7. was改為it is。考查時態(tài)。Now it was the last year of my high school life意為現(xiàn)在是我高中生涯的最后一年。由now可知用一般現(xiàn)在時。故it was改為it is

8.that 去掉。Now that 意為既然；而在此句中所要表達的是當(dāng)前，是一個時間狀語。故將that 去掉。

9. it was the last year of my high school life，but I'm determined to study more harder and make greater progress意為這是我高中的最后一年，我決定學(xué)習(xí)更刻苦，取得更好的進步，根據(jù)句意可知前后只是順承關(guān)系。故but改為and

10. out：分發(fā)；精疲力竭。give in ：放棄。High school life is challenging for me，but I won’t give out意為高中生活對我來說具有挑戰(zhàn)性，但我不會放棄的。故out改為in

考點：考查短文理解及語法知識

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