Question

【題目】假定你是美國(guó)留學(xué)生李華，最近在當(dāng)?shù)貓?bào)紙上看到一則游泳培訓(xùn)班的廣告，稱其有資歷豐富的教練，一周包會(huì)。你會(huì)一點(diǎn)游泳，想在暑假參加訓(xùn)練提升技巧。請(qǐng)你寫信了解相關(guān)情況，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；

2.條件和費(fèi)用；

3.其他特別注意事項(xiàng)。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper, which is really appealing to me.

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I have read your advertisement in the newspaper, which is really appealing to me. With fully qualified instructors, you ensure that learners will be able to swim well after a week’s training.

I can swim a little yet I am interested in attending the training course to enhance my skills. Therefore I am writing to inquire when and where the training course will be given and how long the training course will last each day. Besides, I was wondering if you could tell me how much you will charge me. Last but not least, would you be so kind as to tell me if there is anything special that should be prepared?

I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于應(yīng)用文中的書信，要求以李華的身份向游泳培訓(xùn)班寫信咨詢暑期游泳訓(xùn)練課程的具體信息。

寫作要點(diǎn)有：1．訓(xùn)練的具體時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)。2．條件和費(fèi)用。3．其他特別注意的事項(xiàng)。已經(jīng)在題干中羅列清晰，只需要詳述要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮即可。本文用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)來(lái)寫。寫作過(guò)程中注意使用平時(shí)學(xué)到的短語(yǔ)和句型，注意行文的連貫和邏輯性，還要注意使用多樣化的句式和高級(jí)句式，使文章富有變化，提高文章檔次。