假如你是李華,你的好友張帆迷上了網(wǎng)絡游戲,正好你們學校下周六將組織一次主題為“如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡” 的活動,屆時一位教授將做有關方面報告。請給張帆寫封郵件
內(nèi)容包括:1. 描述活動的目的,形式及過程并邀請請他來參加這次活動。
2.談談你對他的建議和希望。
字數(shù):120 左右 網(wǎng)癮 the Internet addiction


0ne possible version:
Dear ZhangFan,
I’m sorry to hear that you have become addicted to the Internet games. I know you are eager to give it up.luckily,It happens that next Saturday our school will hold an event aiming at helping students fight the Internet addiction. An expert will be invited to give us a speech on how to make good use of the Internet.I think it will be of help to you . If you can come and attend it, I will be happy.
At the same time, as for your addiction,I will give you some suggestions.For one thing,It’s better for you to do some outdoor activities,which can keep your attention off the Internet.For another thing,You can try to make friends with your classmates,by communicating frequently with them,you may forget the Internet.
I hope you can take my suggestions seriously. And get rid of the Internet games.
Yours
LiHua

解析試題分析:本篇書面表達要求寫一封郵件,邀請迷戀上網(wǎng)絡游戲的朋友張帆來參加你們學校下周六將組織一次主題為“如何正確使用網(wǎng)絡” 的活動,因為屆時一位教授將做有關方面報告,而且在郵件中還要提出建議和對他的希望。從要求可以看出本文應該用第一人稱,使用將來時態(tài)。寫電子郵件時語言要自然,提出的建議要中肯,語氣要委婉。這部分要適當?shù)剡M行發(fā)揮想象,比如可以多參加學;顒觼頊p少對網(wǎng)絡的迷戀,要有耐心和毅力去戒掉網(wǎng)癮等等。在寫作時候還要盡量使用高級詞匯和多種句式,為了使行文流暢還要恰當使用連接詞和過渡句等。
【亮點說明】本篇范文要點全面,語言簡潔流暢,結構清晰,層次分明。作者在謀篇布局時使用了經(jīng)典的三段式結構,開頭提出寫信的目的,也就是發(fā)出邀請;第二段提出了一些建議;最后提出了自己對他的希望。在文中作者使用了大量短語比如 become addicted to , be eager to , aim at ,give a speech ,  keep sth off ,communicate with ,take sth seriously, make good use of 等等,顯示了作者詞匯的豐富。此外,作者還用到了for one thing ,for another thing來連接句子,提高了作文的檔次,
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