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【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

The hot pot, dated back to several thousand years ago, is one of the traditional Chinese diets, which enjoys a wide popularity. In the cold winter, people like to eat the hot pot what instantly warms up their bodies and lift up their spirits. Nowadays in many residents, homes, the traditional coal-heated hot pots have been replacing gradually by modem electrical cooks. Hot pot styles and ingredients vary region to region in China. Generally speaking, the common meats used including pork, beef, chicken and duck, so other hot pot dishes are vegetables, mushrooms, noodles and etc. When people have the hot pot together, what real matters is not only the food but also the atmosphere.

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【解析】考查固定用法。dating back to追溯到，是固定用法，所以dated改成dating。

考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。popularity是不可數(shù)名詞，所以刪除a。

考查定語從句。that/which instantly warms up their bodies and lift up their spirits.作定語，修飾the hot pot，所以that/which instantly warms up their bodies and lift up their spirits.是一個定語從句，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指物，所以what改that/which。

考查主謂一致。that/which instantly warms up their bodies and lift up their spirits.是一個定語從句，修飾先行詞the hot pot，關(guān)系詞在從句中作主語，指代the hot pot，表示一個客觀的事實，用一般現(xiàn)在時，且主語the hot pot是第三人稱單數(shù)，謂語動詞也用單數(shù)，所以lift改成lifts。

考查語態(tài)。coal-heated hot pots與replace之間是被動關(guān)系，所以用被動語態(tài)，replacing改成replaced。

考查名詞。表示“現(xiàn)代化的電子炊具”，且是復(fù)數(shù)意義，所以cooks改成cookers。

考查固定短語。vary from不同，是固定短語，所以vary后加from。

考查動詞。include指某整體包含或容納某部分，常用于解釋或補充說明，所以including改成include。

考查連詞。表示并列關(guān)系，所以so改成while/and。

考查副詞。修飾動詞matters，用副詞，所以real改成 really。