Question

14．目前，有些同學(xué)一遇到作業(yè)問題就立即上網(wǎng)搜索答案．請你針對這一現(xiàn)象，根據(jù)以下提示給校報編輯寫一篇英語短文．
1、原因：省時，應(yīng)付；
2、危害：滋生惰性，影響?yīng)毩⑺伎迹?br />3、你的看法…
注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；
2、可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3、短文開頭語和結(jié)束語已給出（不計入詞數(shù)）．
Dear Editor，
Nowadays，some students will immediately search for the answers online when they come across difficult homework problems．
                                                            
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型
1．A number of factors account for the phenomenon．
一些因素導(dǎo)致了這一現(xiàn)象．
 account for，意為"導(dǎo)致"，還含有"對…負(fù)有責(zé)任；對…做出解釋；說明…的原因；（比例）占"的意思．
2．Secondly，they will become even lazier with time going on．
其次，因為隨著時間的推移，他們甚至將會變得越來越懶惰．
with引導(dǎo)的伴隨狀語，所表達(dá)的動作或狀態(tài)是伴隨著句子的謂語動詞become的動作而發(fā)生或存在的．

解答 Dear Editor，
 Nowadays some students will immediately search for the answers online when they come across difficult homework problems．
【高分句型一】A number of factors account for the phenomenon．For one thing，they think only in this way can they save a lot of time．For another，they won't be punished by their teachers for not having finished the homework．（說明上網(wǎng)搜答案的原因）
 However，it may bring about severe consequences．Firstly，the answers posted on the Internet may not be correct．【高分句型二】Secondly，they will become even lazier with time going on．What's worse，they will lack the habit of thinking by themselves．（說明網(wǎng)上搜答案的危害）
 As far as I'm concerned，doing homework is a good way to review our lessons and develop our ability to solve problems independently．So we should take it seriously．（給出自己的看法）
Yours，
Li Hua．

點評 考生在寫作時，先通過一句總結(jié)來說明造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因以及該現(xiàn)象會產(chǎn)生的后果，再逐一加以剖析，條理性很強，言簡意賅．