Question

9．今年，你將高三畢業(yè)．為使即將升入本校的高一新生的高中生活更順利，學(xué)校的《英語學(xué)習(xí)天地》請你給他們留言，提出一些中肯的建議．請根據(jù)下面的提示，用英語寫一篇短文．
1．合理分配學(xué)習(xí)、鍛煉和休息時間；
2．搞好老師和同學(xué)之間的關(guān)系；
3．積極參加社團活動．
注意：1．詞數(shù)：不少于100詞；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱式命題作文，要求給學(xué)校的《英語學(xué)習(xí)園地》請你給他們留言，提出一些中肯的建議．命題中給出了三個寫作要點，因此考生需要仔細(xì)審題，把握主題，寫作中要包含所有提示要點，根據(jù)要點進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)暮侠淼陌l(fā)揮和想象．文章要注意遣詞造句，注重句式變化，調(diào)動自己多年以來的英語積累和語言儲備，寫出富于變化，有利于高中生活的短文．結(jié)合所給材料，可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述，人稱以第二人稱為主．由于是提供建議，寫作中注意使用連詞，或者序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系．

解答 Here are some suggestions for you，which may help you enjoy your school life better．
As senior high school students．You will be living a very busy life．So first of all，you should arrange your time properly．You'd better make a timetable so that you know when to study，exercise and rest．Only in this way can you make good use of every minute．Besides，while in school，it is wise to develop a pleasant relationship with teachers and classmates．When you have a problem that you can't work it out alone，you'd better turn to your teachers or classmates for help．Of course you should lend a helping hand when necessary．Last but not least，I advise you to take an active part in societies at school，which will give you good chances to make friends and challenge yourselves．
I hope the suggestions above will help you go through a rich and colorful school life．I'm sure that a beautiful future is waiting you．

點評 文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如living a very busy life，take an active part in；短語Only in this way can you make good use of every minute的倒裝句及when引導(dǎo)的時間從句等等．并注意了句子的銜接如：So first of all，Besides，Last but not least等等．