Question

9．DIY（Do It Yourself） 現(xiàn)在越來(lái)越得到青睞．你愿意選擇這一方式嗎？請(qǐng)說(shuō)出你的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
句型一：
When a student has difficulty in doing①his homework and try asking②his parents about that，his parents would say，"Do it yourself．"
當(dāng)一個(gè)學(xué)生做作業(yè)有困難，并試圖詢問他的父母時(shí)，他的父母會(huì)說(shuō)，"自己動(dòng)手．"
①has/have difficulty in doing sth．意為：做某事有困難．
②try doing sth．意為：嘗試著做某事．
句型二：
They buy the components of a computer①instead of②a ready-made one from a computer market and make them up③．
他們從計(jì)算機(jī)市場(chǎng)購(gòu)買的是計(jì)算機(jī)的零件而不是現(xiàn)成的，然后將它們組裝起來(lái)．
①the components of a computer指計(jì)算機(jī)的零件．
②instead of：代替，而不是．
③make up：組成．

解答 Do It Yourself
With the development of the society，DIY is becoming more and more popular．（概述人們對(duì)DIY的態(tài)度）But first it only meant that one should do its things itself．When a student has difficulty in doing his homework and try asking his parents about that，his parents would say，"Do it yourself．"【高分句型一】That means you can't rely on others．（舉例說(shuō)明DIY曾經(jīng)的含義）But nowadays DIY has a new meaning that one wants to do things by its own．For example，some people would like to make a computer themselves．They buy the components of a computer instead of a ready-made one from a computer market and make them up．【高分句型二】They enjoy their work and it usually costs less．（舉例說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在DIY所被賦予的新含義）
In my opinion，that DIY is popular is because it can reveal one's abilities and skills．You can imagine when a person completes a DIY，how happy he is!What's more，DIY costs less and can help a person save money．So，I like DIY too．（表達(dá)作者對(duì)DIY的態(tài)度）

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