Question

最近在你班的班會(huì)上進(jìn)行了一次有關(guān)是在國(guó)外讀大學(xué)還是在國(guó)內(nèi)讀大學(xué)的討論會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇英文短文為校報(bào)投稿。
要求：要點(diǎn)要全，可適當(dāng)拓展。字?jǐn)?shù)：120

在國(guó)外上大學(xué)	在國(guó)內(nèi)上大學(xué)
學(xué)校知名度高、注重實(shí)踐、環(huán)境優(yōu)雅	優(yōu)秀的教師團(tuán)隊(duì)、設(shè)備先進(jìn)、學(xué)費(fèi)較低
費(fèi)用高	實(shí)踐的機(jī)會(huì)不多
你的觀點(diǎn)或看法

Answer 1

Our class have held a heated debate about whether going abroad or staying at home for college education recently.
Some students think that studying abroad is a good choice. Because there are lots of famous colleges abroad. The environment there is nice and quiet. But the expense of studying abroad is rather high. Others prefer to study home. They believe that domestic colleges have excellent teams of teachers, the teaching equipment is advanced, and the tuition is lower. However, chances of practising is not as many as studying abroad.
As far as I am concerned, I choose domestic colleges. Although the domestic university may not be as good as the foreign university, culture difference is a big problem. To study abroad, you must get over the obstacle of language and differences in behavior and habits.

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