Question

1．請根據(jù)以下提示，并結合事例，用英語寫一篇短文．
Everyone hopes to succeed overnight，but we should be aware that"a journey of a thousand miles begins with the first step．"
注意：
1、無須寫標題，不得照抄英語提示語；
2、除詩歌外，文體不限；
3、內容必須結合你生活中的一個事例；
4、文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；
5、詞數(shù)不少于120個，如引用提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)．
With competition becoming increasingly fierce，everyone dreams about succeeding overnight，but success may be a long process，in which you must work hard step by step．（高分句型一）Here is an experience that deeply impressed me．Three years ago，when I came to the high school，I was poor in English．I wanted to conquer it in a short time but I failed just because of the lack of a solid foundation．Helped by my teacher，I decidedto start rom the beginning，attaching importance to standard pronunciation，basic vocabulary and practical grammar．（高分句型二）Moreover，I made it a rule to recite five sentences each day．Then，the longer I learnt，the more progress I made．Now what I'm proud of is that I've won a prize in English Talent Competition．Judging from the experience，I firmlybelieve that on the wayto success，there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本文是篇半開放性作文．有部分的文字提示給出了一個討論的話題是"千里之行始于足下"；從自己生活中的一些小事中舉一到兩個小的例子來進行說明．對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力．在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭．同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides，further，last but not least等．在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性．
【亮點說明】本文結構明確，思路清晰．分三段把內容要點都涵蓋了．同時注意應用較高級的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如in which you must work hard step by step．because of the lack of a solid foundation，there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs．，還運用了Judging from the experience．非謂語動詞作狀語等等．并注意了句子的銜接如：Moreover，Then，等．

解答 With competition becoming increasingly fierce，everyone dreams about succeeding overnight，but success may be a long process，in which you must work hard step by step．（高分句型一）Here is an experience that deeply impressed me．Three years ago，when I came to the high school，I was poor in English．I wanted to conquer it in a short time but I failed just because of the lack of a solid foundation．Helped by my teacher，I decided to start  rom the beginning，attaching importance to standard pronunciation，basic vocabulary and practical grammar．（高分句型二）Moreover，I made it a rule to recite five sentences each day．Then，the longer I learnt，the more progress I made．Now what I'm proud of is that I've won a prize in English Talent Competition．Judging from   the experience，I firmly believe that on  the way  to success，there are no lifts or elevators but steps and stairs．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．