14.假定你是李華.某教育集團(tuán)正在你市組織中學(xué)生開(kāi)展赴美冬令營(yíng)活動(dòng),現(xiàn)招募一名學(xué)生領(lǐng)隊(duì),你有意應(yīng)聘.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),給該項(xiàng)目的負(fù)責(zé)人安娜寫(xiě)一封英文自薦信.要點(diǎn)如下:
1.表示感興趣;
2.個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)(語(yǔ)言、文化、體質(zhì)及性格等方面);
3.希望得到回復(fù).
注意:
1.詞數(shù)100左右;
2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù).
Dear Anna,
I'm glad to learn that you are looking for a student to be captain of the winter camp.
I'm quite interested in the position and I think I'm qualified for it.
Firstly,I have no problem communicating with English-speakers.Secondly,as an English lover,I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs.(高分句型一)Thirdly,as I'm always doing exercise in my spare time,I'm very fit.In addition,I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others.(高分句型二)Above all,I have been to America.I was an exchange student there for three months.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(高分句型三)
I'm looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua.

分析 本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于提綱類(lèi)作文,根據(jù)提示信息假定你是李華.某教育集團(tuán)正在你市組織中學(xué)生開(kāi)展赴美冬令營(yíng)活動(dòng),現(xiàn)招募一名學(xué)生領(lǐng)隊(duì),你有意應(yīng)聘.請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn),給該項(xiàng)目的負(fù)責(zé)人安娜寫(xiě)一封英文自薦信,寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn):1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,要點(diǎn)包括:表示感興趣;個(gè)人優(yōu)勢(shì)(語(yǔ)言、文化、體質(zhì)及性格等方面);希望得到回復(fù).2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ),按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫(xiě).本文寫(xiě)作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài).4.注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點(diǎn).
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):look for尋找;be interested in 對(duì)…感興趣;Firstly首先;Secondly其次;Thirdly第三;In addition另外;Above all最重要的是;take…into consideration把…考慮在內(nèi);
Secondly,as an English lover,I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs.(高分句型一)
In addition,I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others.(高分句型二)
I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(高分句型三)

解答 Dear Anna,
       I'm glad to learn that you are looking for a student to be captain of the winter camp.I'm quite interested in the position and I think I'm qualified for it.
       Firstly,I have no problem communicating with English-speakers.Secondly,as an English lover,I've read a lot about America and have much knowledge of America customs.(高分句型一)Thirdly,as I'm always doing exercise in my spare time,I'm very fit.In addition,I'm easy to get along with and I enjoy working with others.(高分句型二)Above all,I have been to America.I was an exchange student there for three months.I'd appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.(高分句型三)
        I'm looking forward to your early reply.
                                                                                                           Yours sincerely,
                                                                                                                     Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫(xiě)作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫(xiě)作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力.在撰寫(xiě)時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致,時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子;二是寫(xiě)作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫(xiě)作方面的基本方法和技巧.

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