【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間變換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

3．改錯(cuò)格式錯(cuò)誤不得分。

In the past，my hometown was very sma11．People there lived poor life and the houses were very old and shabby，even some of them were shaking in the wind．As for the traffic，it was very inconvenient that almost no tourists came．

However，there has been many changes in my hometown until now．Life has become better. The houses become larger and brighter, but more people get their own cars．Everywhere is decorated with green trees and beautiful flowers and grass．What’s more，thousands of tourist from the world came here every year，which is really splendid．I believe my hometown will become more and more developed and beautifully．Everything in it will represent the advancing science，and technology．At the same time，I will always keep it in my mind that my hometown must be greater in the future．

【答案】

【1】live后面加a

【2】them--which

【3】very--so

【4】has--have

【5】but--and

【6】tourist--tourists

【7】came--come

【8】beautifully--beautiful

【9】advancing--advanced

【10】去掉my

【解析】

【1】live后面加a 考查固定短語(yǔ)。Live a ..life過(guò)著。。的生活；

【2】them--which 考查定語(yǔ)從句。句意：人們過(guò)著貧窮的生活，住的房子很老很舊，一些房子搖搖欲墜。Some of which代指的是一些房子；

【3】very—so 考查形容詞 。這個(gè)句子考查so…that如此以致于這個(gè)句型；

【4】has—have 考查主謂一致 there have/has been 這個(gè)句子與后面主語(yǔ)many changes保持一致；

【5】but--and 考查連詞。句意：房子很大很明亮并且越來(lái)越多的人有自己的車。兩個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系；

【6】tourist--tourists 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。Thousands of 后面加名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式；

【7】came--come 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。根據(jù)every year每年可知用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；

【8】beautifully--beautiful 考查形容詞。句意：我相信我的家鄉(xiāng)會(huì)變得更發(fā)達(dá)和漂亮，形容詞做表語(yǔ)；

【9】advancing--advanced 考查形容詞 。句意：一切代表先進(jìn)的科學(xué)技術(shù)；

【10】去掉my 考查動(dòng)詞短語(yǔ)。Keep sth in mind記住某事；

考點(diǎn) ：短文改錯(cuò)；

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