Question

9．假定你是李華．你收到了美國(guó)筆友彼得寄來(lái)的最新英文小說(shuō)．請(qǐng)給他回信，內(nèi)容包括：
1．小說(shuō)收到；
2．回贈(zèng)禮物；
3．禮物意義；
4．邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華．
注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．
Best wishes．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關(guān)于禮物的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱(chēng)和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一感謝禮物；二回贈(zèng)禮物以及禮物意義；三邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華．
高分句型：
1．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．句子里as引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞a lovely gift，和such呼應(yīng)．
感謝你這份可愛(ài)的禮物，這一直是我期盼的．
2．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere句子里which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，代指先行詞Paper cutting．
剪紙是中國(guó)文化傳承的獨(dú)特形式之一，它經(jīng)常用于裝飾歡樂(lè)氣氛的．

解答 Dear Peter，
I'm glad to receive the novel．Thank you for such a lovely gift as I have been expecting for a long time．【高分句型一】This novel gives me some insights into American society and daily life．（感謝禮物）
I know you're interested in Chinese festivals，and therefore I choose an album of paper cutting for you．Paper cutting is a unique form of Chinese cultural relics，which is often used as a decoration for a joyous atmosphere．【高分句型二】I hope it will bring happiness and luck to your family as it always does in China．（回贈(zèng)禮物以及禮物意義）
Expecting you to come to China and experience the rich culture in person．（邀請(qǐng)來(lái)華）
Best wishes．
Yours，
                                                                         Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 考查提綱類(lèi)作文．
寫(xiě)作文注重句式的變化．常用的句式變化的運(yùn)用有：簡(jiǎn)單句轉(zhuǎn)化為并列句或復(fù)合句；主動(dòng)態(tài)轉(zhuǎn)化為被動(dòng)態(tài)；陳述轉(zhuǎn)為倒裝；一般句轉(zhuǎn)化為強(qiáng)調(diào)句；肯定轉(zhuǎn)化為反義詞表達(dá)或雙重否定；狀語(yǔ)從句轉(zhuǎn)化為分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)；定語(yǔ)從句轉(zhuǎn)化為分詞短語(yǔ)作定語(yǔ)等等．例如：
　　①The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　good．轉(zhuǎn)化為　The　teacher　said　that　the　plan　was　not　bad．
　�、赪hen　the　audience　heard　the　strange　noise，they　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened．轉(zhuǎn)化為　Hearing　the　strange　noise，the　audience　all　ran　out　of　the　hall　to　see　what　happened