Question

3．假設(shè)你是李華，準(zhǔn)備參加學(xué)校舉辦的主題為"健康成長"的英語作文比賽．請(qǐng)按要求寫一篇短文，主要內(nèi)容包括：
1．樂觀的人生態(tài)度；
2．努力學(xué)習(xí)；
3．參加體育鍛煉．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．文章的開頭已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things．      ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇要點(diǎn)文．寫作時(shí)，首先要寫全要點(diǎn)；其次要注意以第一人稱來表達(dá)；最后，要注意時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)為主．
重點(diǎn)短語和句型：
attitude to 對(duì)待某事的態(tài)度
consist of 組成
in face of 面對(duì)
keep fit 保持健康
Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times．
句中not only…but also…不但…而且…，連接對(duì)稱結(jié)構(gòu)．
In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．
句中so that連接目的狀語從句．
If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．
句中if連接條件狀語從句．

解答 We all want to grow up happily and healthily，and for this goal we must do several things．【點(diǎn)明主題】
      Firstly，we should develop a good attitude to life．Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times．（高分句型一）We should be brave in face of difficulties．Secondly，we must study hard because knowledge is power．If we have the power，we can help to build our country and enjoy life better．In order to study well，we need to do sports so that we can keep fit．（高分句型二）We can go running，play ball games or simply take a walk after a day's study．【表達(dá)看法】
      If we do those things well，we will be able to grow up happily and healthily．（高分句型三）【總結(jié)中心】

點(diǎn)評(píng) 書面表達(dá)題考查的是英語的應(yīng)用能力．寫作時(shí)要注意：要點(diǎn)的提煉要全；關(guān)鍵短語和句型要寫對(duì)；過渡詞和過渡短語要自然，通順地道；最后還要注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)使用要正確．