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16．假設(shè)你叫李華，你校高二同學(xué)正在開展一場(chǎng)討論，主題是：高中學(xué)生要不要參加體育鍛煉．請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，給英文報(bào)社寫一封信，介紹討論情況．
55%的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
應(yīng)該每天進(jìn)行體育鍛煉；
做早操，打乒乓球、打籃球，但不要時(shí)間過長；
鍛煉能增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，減少疾病；
鍛煉能使大腦休息，使學(xué)習(xí)效果更好．
45% 的同學(xué)認(rèn)為：
鍛煉浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；
鍛煉容易使人疲勞；
鍛煉以后很興奮，較長時(shí)間不能投入學(xué)習(xí)；
鍛煉中途可能會(huì)受傷．
[寫作要求]1．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫．
2．表達(dá)清晰．
3．詞數(shù)100左右．
4．開頭結(jié)尾已寫出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
參考詞匯：build their body and reduce lot of diseases．增強(qiáng)體質(zhì)，減少疾�。�
a waste of time and tiring               浪費(fèi)時(shí)間，使人疲勞
be hurt  受傷

Dear Editor，
I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we've had about whether students should take physical exercise．
                                                           
Yours  sincerely，
Li  Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息進(jìn)入高三以后，很多學(xué)校都取消了體育鍛煉．對(duì)此情況，有人贊同有人反對(duì)．關(guān)于這一話題，你們?cè)诎嗌线M(jìn)行了激烈的討論，大家發(fā)表了不同的看法，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：分別從正反觀點(diǎn)和理由兩個(gè)方面來討論該話題 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：take exercise做鍛煉；build up our body強(qiáng)身健體；Besides另外；However然而；a waste of time浪費(fèi)時(shí)間；In addition另外；Personally就個(gè)人而言；keep fit保持健康；
55% of the  students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）
They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）
In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Editor，
      I'm writing to tell you about a discussion we've had about whether students should take physical exercise．
      55% of the students think that we should take exercise every day，such as doing morning exercise，playing table tennis or basketball so that we can build up our body to prevent illness．（高分句型一）Besides，it makes us completely relaxed after long-time study in classroom．
      However，the other students are against taking regular exercise．They complain that exercising is a waste of time because it makes us tired or feel too excited to go on learning．（高分句型二）In addition，we may hurt ourselves during the play，which is not what we want．（高分句型三）
       Personally，we need to take physical exercise on a regular basis to keep fit because nothing is more important than good health．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours  sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                           Li  Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．