Question

【題目】假設你是李華,你的英國筆友Henry 最近來信,詢問你的暑期安排。請胸根據(jù)以下要點,用英語回一封信,說明你的計劃,并簡述理由。

1.休息;2.讀書;3.陪伴父母;4.參加社會活動;

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右,信的開頭和結尾已為你寫好(不計入總詞數(shù));

2.可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié),使行文連貫;

3.參考詞匯:社會活動——social activities

Dear Henry,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】I’m glad to receive your letter. It’s a pleasure for me to tell you my plan of this coming summer vacation.

First of all, a good rest is needed because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years. Of course, I’ll do some reading for fun, and for knowledge as well. I’ll spend some time staying with my parents, chatting with them and doing some housework. They’ve done so much for me, you know. If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.

Best wishes!

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本次作文要求用英語回一封信，說明你的暑期計劃，并簡述理由。要點如下：1.休息；2.讀書；3.陪伴父母；4.參加社會活動。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要富有變化。要注意書寫，認真查驗是否有漏寫情況等。

寫作亮點：本篇條理清楚，要點全面，結構連貫。其句式上的變化既使得文章生動而流暢，也體現(xiàn)了作者駕馭句式的能力。例如：文章運用了省略句和結果狀語從句If possible, I’ll take part in some social activities so that I can know more about the society.等。