Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處，每處僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（^），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

注意：1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My grandfather and I enjoy fishing. One Sunday morning we go fishing at a lake. We took ours fishing poles and headed for the lake. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water. Before waiting for about half an hour, I was beginning to get impatiently. I wanted to give up, and my grandfather told me to wait a little longer. Finally, there were a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught . Within the next few minute, my grandfather also caught a fish. Felt hungry, we built a fire by the lake and barbecued the fish. It was delicious

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】go—went

【2】ours— our

【3】去掉we前面的so

【4】before--after

【5】impatient—impatiently

【6】and-but

【7】were—was

【8】fish前加a

【9】minute—minutes

【10】felt—feeling

【解析】

【1】go—went 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)。時(shí)態(tài)上下文前后不一致，根據(jù)文意周日早晨釣魚是發(fā)生過(guò)的事情所以應(yīng)該用一般過(guò)去時(shí)

【2】ours— our 考查名詞性物主代詞和形容詞性物主代詞的用法。名詞性物主代詞ours 不能再與名詞連用，而后面的fishing poles是名詞，修飾名詞與名詞連用用形容詞性物主代詞our

【3】去掉we前面的so 考查連詞。 上文有as soon as 引導(dǎo)從句，則后一句話為主句不用引導(dǎo)詞。連詞多用

【4】before--after 考查介詞。根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是等了大約半小時(shí)之后而不是之前

【5】impatient—impatiently 副詞與形容詞混用。系表結(jié)構(gòu)的表語(yǔ)一般用形容詞而不能用副詞做表語(yǔ)。get為系動(dòng)詞后面要用形容詞 impatient做表語(yǔ)。

【6】and-but 考查連詞。 上句話是想放棄與下文的爺爺讓我再等等之間是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系而不是順接，所以and改成but

【7】were—was 考查主謂一致。There be 句型是就近一致原則，離be動(dòng)詞近的是a sudden poll 為單數(shù)，所以be動(dòng)詞用 was 而不用were。

【8】fish前加a 考查冠詞。這里的fish是一條魚是可數(shù)名詞，可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)前要加冠詞a。fish 單復(fù)數(shù)同形，但是是可數(shù)名詞需加冠詞。下文的“caught a fish”有提示

【9】minute—minutes 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。根據(jù)句意接下來(lái)的幾分鐘，minute是可數(shù)名詞好幾分鐘要用復(fù)數(shù)形式

【10】felt—feeling 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞feel的邏輯主語(yǔ)是we(我們)是主動(dòng)感覺(jué)，所以非謂語(yǔ)用現(xiàn)在分詞feeling表示主動(dòng)含義

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