Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你最近讀了一篇主題為"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。請給你的英國朋友Jack發(fā)一封郵件，與他分享你對快樂的理解，內(nèi)容包括：

1.快樂的真正意義；

2.獲得快樂的途徑。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Jack，

Recently, 1 read a passage---- The True Meaning of Happiness. I'm glad to share my views with you. Undoubtedly, all of us look for happiness, but what is the true meaning of happiness? Personally,working hard and being committed to whatever we are doing can make us feel happy. In reality, nothing can replace the sense of achievement one feels after much devotion.

My best way to gain happiness is as follows. Firstly, I'm buried in my studies. Only when I try my best can I gain a sense of happiness. Secondly, I'm willing to share my happiness with others. Sharing can release my sorrow and double my pleasure.

What's your opinion? Looking forward to your reply!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封電子郵件。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，本篇為一封電子郵件：假定你是李華，你最近讀了一篇主題為"The True Meaning of Happiness"的文章。請給你的英國朋友Jack發(fā)一封郵件，與他分享你對快樂的理解，內(nèi)容包括：1.快樂的真正意義；2.獲得快樂的途徑。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組），如：share my views with you（和你分享我的觀點）；look for happiness（尋找幸福）；being committed to（決心從事）；gain a sense of happiness（獲得一種幸福感）；等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。