Question

【題目】Directions: Write an English composition in 120—150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.

進入高中生活以來已經(jīng)有兩個月的時間了，在這一段時間里，一定有令你難忘的回憶，請描述令你印象深刻的一件事，并談?wù)勀愕捏w會。

注意：請勿出現(xiàn)真實的班級和姓名。

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Answer 1

【答案】Generally speaking, high school life is busy and fulfilling. In my opinion, my high school life is challengeable and warm.

　　I used to be very shy and had some difficulty making new friends. However, my first task in high school was to introduce myself in front of all my classmates. I got fully prepared and tried to remember every word by heart. Unfortunately, when it was my turn to make the speech, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word. Seeing that, my teacher said gently to me, ”Take it easy. Be confident and you can make it.” To encourage me, my classmates applauded me. Suddenly I was not nervous any more, and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly. Again, the classroom broke into thunderous applause.

　　It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident. It was the most unforgettable thing in my life.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于記敘文，要求考生寫一件高中生活中難忘的事。

第一步：審題

體裁：記敘文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般過去時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式

　　　首段：簡要描述高中生活的特點，引起下文

　　　中間段：具體描述一件難忘的事。

尾段：總結(jié)全文，點題。

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

busy and fulfilling，challengeable and warm，have some difficulty making new friends，

by heart，so … that…，take it easy，broke into thunderous applause

第三步：連詞成句

In my opinion, my high school life is challengeable and warm.

I used to be very shy and had some difficulty making new friends.

When it was my turn to make the speech, I was so nervous that I couldn’t say a word.

My teacher said gently to me, ”Take it easy. Be confident and you can make it.”

Suddenly I was not nervous any more, and I finished my speech fluently and perfectly.

The classroom broke into thunderous applause.

It was my teacher and classmates that made me more confident.

It was the most unforgettable thing in my life.

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰。

Generally speaking, in my opinion, However, Unfortunately, Seeing that, Again,

第五步：潤色修改