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【題目】高三年級是高中生活的最后一年，這一年中，學生們面臨著沉重的升學壓力。因此，很多學生課間也坐在教室里用功，但學習效率和成績并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾�。現(xiàn)在就請你以“A Ten-minute Break”為題，按下列要點寫一篇短文，讓這些同學從中有所啟發(fā)。要點如下：

1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。

2．要注意適當?shù)男菹⒎绞健?/span>

3．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。

注意：①開頭已經給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；②詞數(shù)100左右。

A Ten-minute Break

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited._______________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

A Ten-minute Break

As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.

During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.

My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. When the next class begins, I feel fresh again.

【解析】

試題分析：高三年級是高中生活的最后一年，這一年中，學生們面臨著沉重的升學壓力。因此，很多學生課間也坐在教室里用功，但學習效率和成績并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾��，F(xiàn)在就請你以“A Ten-minute Break”為題，按下列要點寫一篇短文，讓這些同學從中有所啟發(fā)。寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系。根據句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點說明】What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. 運用主語從句；Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally.恰當運用連詞；In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is necessary.用to do形式做主語；Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. 運用并列句；As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break. 此句式為文章增色，顯得文章很有檔次。