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17．調(diào)查顯示，近幾年我國中學(xué)生的健康狀況不容樂觀．請(qǐng)你就How to improve the health of high school students這一話題，寫一篇英語短文，要求涵蓋以下要點(diǎn)：
1．健康狀況：近視、肥胖、體質(zhì)弱等問題．
2．原因：看電視多，課業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)重，鍛煉少．
3．應(yīng)采取的措施：多鍛煉，健康飲食，學(xué)校減負(fù)等．
注意：詞數(shù)100左右，文章的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
  A research shows that middle school students'health condition is declining
obviously in recent years．                                                                                  

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Most students are near-sighted and some are weak or over-weighted，so that they can't reach the physical standard．大多數(shù)學(xué)生都近視、體弱或者肥胖，因此他們根本身體健康狀況不達(dá)標(biāo)．
高分句型二：
It's time that we should find ways to improve students'health condition．
我們是該時(shí)候想辦法來提高學(xué)生健康問題了．
句型一 so that they can't reach the physical standard 該句是一個(gè)由so that 引導(dǎo)的結(jié)果狀語從句，說明前面提出的事實(shí)而引發(fā)的結(jié)果
句型二 It's time that we should find ways to improve students'health condition 該句是一個(gè)由ir作形式主語而that 作引導(dǎo)詞的主語從句，該主語從句的謂語部分使用了虛擬語氣，即sb+should+do sth 是某人該做某事的時(shí)候了
此外，該文章還有以下重要短語以及詞匯：in addition 除此以外  take measures to do sth采取措施做某事

解答 Research shows that middle school students'health condition is declining obviously in recent years．Most students are near-sighted and some are weak or over-weighted，so that they can't reach the physical standard．（提出觀點(diǎn)）（高分句型一）
    What causes such problems？First，many students spend too much time in front of computers or TV sets．Second，students have to prepare themselves for examinations．As a result，they spend most of their time on their subjects．Third，many of them don't form the habit of taking physical exercise regularly．（分析原因）
   It's time that we should find ways to improve students'health condition．（高分句型二）One available way is to do physical exercise at least an hour every day．In addition，a healthy diet is also beneficial to it．At last，the schools should take measures to reduce the heavy school-work of the students．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 該書面表達(dá)為提綱類，該類作文一般規(guī)定了考生的寫作思路，羅列出了相應(yīng)的寫作要點(diǎn)．考生在平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯和短語，在寫作時(shí)盡量做到將要點(diǎn)與主題緊密結(jié)合，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)潔明了的語言將作文展示出來．