Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼)劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

There are many similarity between doctors and teachers. First, both doctors and teachers are considering professionals by their communities. The classification of professionals is the high socioeconomic rank where an individual can achieve in this society. Second, both doctors and teachers help others: doctors heal to the bodies of sick people and return them to healthy. And teachers shape the minds of young people and turn them into responsible, educating adults. Last, both doctors and teachers are essential members of a community. It is difficult to imagine a city or town that has not need of neither a doctor or a teacher. Such place would truly be primitive.

Answer 1

【答案】

There are many similarity between doctors and teachers. First, both doctors and teachers are

similarities

considering professionals by their communities. The classification of professionals is the high

considered highest

socioeconomic rank where an individual can achieve in this society. Second, both doctors and

which 或者 刪去where

teachers help others: doctors heal to the bodies of sick people and return them to healthy. And

health

teachers shape the minds of young people and turn them into responsible, educating adults. Last,

educated

both doctors and teachers are essential members of a community. It is difficult to imagine a city

or town that has not need of neither a doctor or a teacher. Such ∧ place would truly be primitive.

no either a

【解析】

試題分析：短文主要講的是老師和醫(yī)生之間的相似之處。

【1】這里說的是老師和學(xué)生之間的相同點(diǎn)，many后跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式，故應(yīng)將similarity改為similarities。

【2】這里用的是被動語態(tài)，be動詞后跟動詞的過去分詞，結(jié)合句意，應(yīng)將considering改為considered。

【3】the后面跟的是形容詞的最高級，故應(yīng)將high改為highest。

【4】該句是定語從句，先行詞是rank，關(guān)系詞在從句中作賓語，故應(yīng)將where改為which。

【5】heal是及物動詞，后面直接跟賓語，故應(yīng)將heal后面的to去掉。

【6】結(jié)合句意，還給他們健康，to后跟名詞，故應(yīng)將healthy改為health。

【7】 educated是形容詞，意為“指受過教育的，有教養(yǎng)的”；結(jié)合句意，應(yīng)將educating改為educated。

【8】沒有需要，要用have no need，故應(yīng)將not改為no。

【9】either…or…是固定搭配，表示“兩者中的任意一個(gè)”，由后面的or可知，應(yīng)將neither改為either。

【10】place是可數(shù)名詞，這里說的是這樣一個(gè)地方，故place前面要加a。