Question

Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking，and 1.   

he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen  2.  

smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room,  3. 

Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went  4.  

back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed,  5.  

he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later，Jack's mother   6.  

smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jack's bedroom. Good heavens! 7.  

Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got some   8.  

water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson. “I'll give up  9.  

smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.   10. 

Answer 1

1. and 改為but

2. 去掉in

3. 正確

4. Heard 改為Hearing

5. back后面加to

6. smoke改為smoking

7. smell 改為smelt

8. sleep 改為asleep或sleeping

9. up 改為out

10. in 后面加a

解析:

1. 前后是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系

2. 這是典型的中國式英語

3. 正確

4. 不應(yīng)為被動(dòng)形式

5. go back to somewhere 回到某地

6. can’t help doing sth “情不自禁做某事”

7. 時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)該前后一致

8. 應(yīng)該為形容詞或者是動(dòng)詞-ing形式

9. “put out the fire”撲滅大火

10.“in a low voice” 低聲地說