Question

【題目】2022年北京—張家口冬奧會將在北京和張家口舉行，為了確保冬奧會圓滿成功，組委會發(fā)起了志愿者招募活動。假如你是北京某中學學生李華，希望能成為一名志愿者。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封申請信，內(nèi)容如下:

基本情況	年齡、性別、學歷
個人條件	英語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉本地情況
我的承諾	提供最佳服務

注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear sir/madam,

My name is LiHua.

______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

LiHua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

My name is LiHua.I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.

I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing,where the Games will be held. I am good at spoken English. As a result , I can communicate with foreigners fluently. What’s more, I’m especially fond of sports. As a local here, I am familiar with the city, which I think is my advantage. As an outgoing and enthusiastic girl, I am ready to help others. Therefore, I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games. If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

I would appreciate it if you could offer me the chance.

Yours faithfully,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求寫一封申請信。

第一步：

審題：申請信 申請當2022年北京—張家口冬奧會的志愿者

人稱：第一人稱

時態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時

結構：總分法，分三部分，第一部分自我介紹基本情況，第二部分說明個人適合當志愿者的條件，第三部分表達你的承諾。

要點：

1. 自我介紹基本情況：年齡、性別、學歷

2．說明個人適合當志愿者的條件：英語口語好、愛好體育、善于交往、樂于助人、熟悉本地情況

3．表達你的承諾：提供最佳服務

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語）

work as；a volunteer；the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games；hold；be good at；spoken English；communicate with；fluently；be fond of；be familiar with；advantage；outgoing；enthusiastic；be suitable to；try one’s best；provide；offer sb. sth.

第三步：連詞成句

(1) I would like to work as a volunteer for the 2022 BeijingZhangjiakou Winter Olympic Games.

(2) I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing.

(3)The Games will be held in Beijing .

(4 )I am good at spoken English.

(5) I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

(6) I’m especially fond of sports.

(7) I am familiar with the city.

(8) I think it is my advantage.

(9) As an outgoing and enthusiastic girl, I am ready to help others.

(10) I am suitable to be a volunteer in the Games.

(11) If I am chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete in the Winter Olympic Games.

根據(jù)提示和關鍵詞進行遣詞造句，適當?shù)剡\用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點詞匯)

用定語從句連接下面兩個句子

(2) I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing.

(3)The Games will be held in Beijing .

→I’m a girl of eighteen years old from a high school in Beijing, where the Games will be held.

用表示因果關系的詞連接下面兩個句子

(4 )I am good at spoken English.

(5) I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. So I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. Therefore, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. As a consequence, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English. As a result, I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

→I am good at spoken English, as a result of which I can communicate with foreigners fluently.

用狀語從句的省略形式改寫下面的句子

(11) If I am chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

→ If chosen, I will try my best to provide the best service for every athlete from different countries.

適當?shù)剡\用高級詞匯、復雜句式提升文章的檔次，增加文章的可讀性。