Question

15．假設你叫王成．你的英國筆友Rose想了解你校學生的體育鍛煉情況，請根據(jù)下圖信息，給她寫一封信，簡要陳述你的看法．

75%的學生不參加體育鍛煉	不愛好體育鍛煉； 無鍛煉場地； 學習負擔重．
25%的學生參加體育鍛煉	…

注意：
         1．詞數(shù)120左右；
         2．開頭和結尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Rose，
As we enter Senior Three，fewer and fewer students do physical training_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Wang Cheng．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
Only in good health can we learn attentively．
高分句型二：
Secondly，as we all know，time is a spongy．
句型一 Only in good health can we learn attentively． 該句是一個only位于句首，修飾介詞短語的倒裝句，即主語同謂語部分的助動詞進行位置的交換：can we learn attentively
句型二 as we all know 該句是一個由as 引導的費限制性定語，as在句中充當賓語，替代后面整個主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 Dear Rose，
    As we enter Senior Three，fewer and fewer students do physical training．According to a survey，only 25% of the students do sports．They can benefit a lot from sports．（參與理由）There are many reasons for students not doing physical training．Some students complain that they have too much homework to do and have not enough time to do exercise．Some of them say that they aren't fond of doing physical training since childhood．Others say that they live far away from places where they can do physical training．（拒絕原因）Because of all these，many of us lack physical training and are in poor health．
   In my view，we should realize the importance of taking exercise．Firstly，without health，we can't learn well．Only in good health can we learn attentively．（高分句型一）Secondly，as we all know，time is a spongy．（高分句型二）We can find time to do exercise if study and physical training are balanced．In all，once we lose our health，we gain nothing．Let's do physical training right now．（個人觀點）
  Best wishes，
  Wang Cheng

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