分析 考查提綱類作文寫作,重點考查考生的書面表達的能力.做家務的話題應該是中學生熟悉,有話可寫的素材,因此難度并不大.題目以周記的形式展現,要求考生先介紹做家務的理由,再介紹做家務的過程,最后寫出自己的感受.考生在寫作時,一定要緊扣寫作要點進行寫作,三個要點都十分重要,如果考生能夠在緊扣寫作要點的基礎上,抓住語言的準確性,再寫出幾個亮點詞匯和句式,得到高分應該比較輕松.
【亮點說明】Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.這句話是現在分詞做狀語,Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?這句話用了同位語從句,I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.這句話里面用了詞組:put sth in place把…布置得井井有條,Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.這句話用了倒裝句,還有文章用了Firstly,After that這樣的詞使文章更加連貫.
Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.(高分句型一)
Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?(高分句型二)
Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.(高分句型三)
解答 I am an 18-year old middle school student.I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework.Feeling quite sorry for that,I begin to think about what to do to help.(高分句型一)
Last Sunday,when my parents went out shopping,I suddenly got an idea:why not give the rooms a thorough cleaning?(高分句型二)Firstly I collected all the books,newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place.Then I wiped the dust off all the furniture.After that,I swept and mopped the floors.
At this very moment,my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy and floors shining.My mother gave me a hug and I could see satisfaction in her eyes.Tired as I was,I never felt so happy.(高分句型三)
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