Question

4．請(qǐng)根據(jù)一下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇短文．
To get along well in school or life，the ability to adapt or adjust to a chaning condition or circumstance is of great importance．
注意：①無(wú)須寫標(biāo)題；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；
③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；
④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱；
⑤詞數(shù)不少于120，引用提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 本文是開放性作文，根據(jù)所給提示，結(jié)合具體事例寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．在寫作時(shí)以第一人稱為主，時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主．
重點(diǎn)詞匯：adapt to（適應(yīng)）；fierce competition（激烈的競(jìng)爭(zhēng)）；at the same time（同時(shí)）；circumstances（環(huán)境）；learning method （學(xué)習(xí)方法）；what's more（而且）； communicated with （與…交流）；not only…but also…（不但…而且…）．
高分句型：1．①When I was in junior middle school，②maybe because of no fierce competition，I could always get top three easily in the exams in my class．
                 ①when引導(dǎo)一個(gè)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句；②這里是一個(gè)插入語(yǔ)，介詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)表示原因．
                 2．Not until I got a very bad score did I finally realize that a lot of things had changed and I had to adapt myself to them．
                  這是一個(gè)倒裝句，Not until 位于句首句子用倒裝，其結(jié)構(gòu)為：Not until+從句/表時(shí)間的詞+助動(dòng)詞+（主句）主語(yǔ)+謂語(yǔ)+…
                 3．Only with this kind of social flexibility can we smooth away difficulties in life．
                  介詞短語(yǔ)Only with this kind of social flexibility 位于句首，句子用倒裝，所以情態(tài)動(dòng)詞can位于主語(yǔ)we的前面．

解答 The ability to adapt to changing condition is one of the essential social skills，which helps reduce conflicts and increase participation in school and life experience．
When I was in junior middle school，maybe because of no fierce competition，I could always get top three easily in the exams in my class（高分句型一）．But everything changed when I entered one or the best high schools in my city．I needed to study many subjects at the same time； and most of my classmates were very smart．But I didn't realize the unfavorable circumstances and still buried myself in playing computer games．Not until I got a very bad score did I finally realize that a lot of things had changed and I had to adapt myself to them（高分句型二）．To improve my score，I made a detailed plan．Besides，I learned hard and tried my heart to find a learning method which suits me．What's more，I communicated with my classmates at leisure to find new friends．What I did was effective．With my efforts，I have not only achieved good scores in academic performance but also gained a lot of friends．
In our life，circumstances are changeable．To fit with them，we have to learn to adapt to the changing condition．Only with this kind of social flexibility can we smooth away difficulties in life（高分句型三）．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是開放性作文，給出了一定的寫作主題，要求學(xué)生自由發(fā)揮．這就考查了學(xué)生發(fā)散思維和歸納判斷能力．寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語(yǔ)中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想；2．根據(jù)文章的中心思想確定文章的人稱和時(shí)態(tài)；2．依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，理清文章的層次，注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．