Question

6．假定你是李華．你的筆友Jane最近因為學業(yè)繁重，身體感到不適，嚴重影響了學習．因此，她發(fā)e-mail給你，尋求你的幫助．請你根據以下要點提示予以回復．
　　　寫作要點：
　　　1．合理的飲食；2．適度的鍛煉；3．充足的睡眠．4．…
　　　注意：
　　　1．短文詞數不少于120；
　　　2．開頭和結尾部分已寫好，不計入總詞數；
　　　3．可根據情況增減細節(jié)，詳略得當；
Dear Jane，
　　　I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days．In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class．
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Best wishes．
 Yours sincerely
　　                                                                                              Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個步驟：1． 認真審題，找準提示語中的關鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據關鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡3． 準確定位人稱、時態(tài)．注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
高分句型一：
Second，taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice
二，每天早晨鍛煉是一個很好的選擇．
高分句型二：
You can do some sports，such as running，walking，or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits．
你可以做一些運動，如跑步，散步，或玩球刷新自己如果天氣允許的話．

解答 Dear Jane，
I'm sorry to hear that you are feeling ill these days．In your letter you asked me how to stay healthy and keep attentive in class．Here is my advice．
First，have three meals a day and never neglect your breakfast．Keep a balanced diet．For example，eat nutritious food like fresh vegetables，fruits，eggs and fish．Second，taking morning exercise every day is a nice choice（高分句型一）．As we all know，everyday exercise helps build a strong body．You can do some sports，such as running，walking，or playing ball games to refresh yourself if weather permits（高分句型二）．But，remember not to exercise outdoors in a smoggy day．Finally，don't stay up too late to make sure you have a good sleep every night．
If you do accordingly，I believe you'll feel well soon and you can listen to your teacher energetically and attentively．
Best wishes．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua

點評 本書面表達為議論文，議論文是對某現象或觀點進行點評．寫作時，應注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結構，使用足夠的論據來分層次論證自己的觀點．