Question

8．假如你是李華，一學(xué)期的高中生活即將結(jié)束，請按以下提示，給你的英國好友 Wilson 寫一封e-mail，講一講你的高中生活．內(nèi)容包括：
（1）總體感受   （2）師生關(guān)系  （3）學(xué)習(xí)   （4）老師及教學(xué)  （5）今后打算
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；   （2）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；  （3）開頭語已為你寫好．
Dear Wilson，
How time flies!I'm glad to share my senior school life with you．
Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）For instance，Maths and English are two examples to show my progress．
I'm lucky to meet so many excellent teachers with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）
Thanks for your concern!
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息給你的英國好友 Wilson 寫一封e-mail，講一講你的高中生活，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)：（1）總體感受   （2）師生關(guān)系  （3）學(xué)習(xí)   （4）老師及教學(xué)  （5）今后打算  2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：Generally speaking一般的來說；get used to習(xí)慣于；thanks to幸虧，由于；For instance比如；pay more attention to更關(guān)注；deal with應(yīng)對，處理
Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）
I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）
As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wilson，
    How time flies!I'm glad to share my senior school life with you．
    Generally speaking，I have got used to it，and have developed the way of learning．（高分句型一）I have a good relationship with my teachers and classmates，and thanks to their help，I have made much progress during the first term．（高分句型二）For instance，Maths and English are two examples to show my progress．
    I'm lucky to meet so many excellent teachers with rich teaching experience and good teaching methods．As for my future plan，I will pay more attention to basic knowledge of every subject and proper time management is also important because I have many subjects to deal with．（高分句型三）
    Thanks for your concern!
    Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                               Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．