Question

當今，很多中學生都紛紛開微博。一方面，微博可以作為展示自己的窗口，以釋放學習的壓力，因此已經(jīng)被越來越多的中學生所接受。但是，另一方面，很多家長和老師都認為管理個人微博要花相當多的時間和精力，會耽誤學習。

請簡要介紹這一現(xiàn)象，并發(fā)表自己的看法。

注意：詞數(shù)100-120左右。

參考詞匯： 開微博 open one's microblog

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Answer 1

Nowadays, it is common that more and more high school students open their own microblogs on the Internet. For one thing, it can provide a colorful platform to showcase their talent. For another, it is a useful way to release their pressure. And all these make it more and more popular with high school students. But many parents and teachers hold a different view, they think that management one's microblog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used to study.

In my view, I am greatly in favor of this activity. Today the Internet is playing an important and essential role in our life. Therefore as high school students of the Information Age, we need to learn make use of this meaningful tool to communicate and display ourselves. What's more, opening and organizing microblogs need various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on. Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful microblog. As a result, we improve ourselves while organizing our microblogs.

In fact, Microblog itself is of little harm. It is your attitude towards it that matters. We should take the advantages and avoid some bad effects.

【解析】

試題分析：考查開放性作文寫作,開放性作文給出了一個話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點說明】范文中運用一些常見的短語In my view,在我看來；in favor of支持；play a role in 扮演重要角色；What's more而且；As a result結(jié)果；they think that management one's microblog will take a lot of time and energy, which should be used to study.這個句子which引導非限制性定語從句；What's more, opening and organizing microblogs need various abilities such as writing, designing, being skillful at computer and so on這個句子考查到動名詞做主語；Only if we master those abilities can we make a successful microblog.這個句子運用到only +狀語+部分倒裝 ；

考點： 提綱類作文