Question

【題目】假定你是李華，國外著名學習網 Student Tube邀請你發(fā)帖分享你平時的學習方式。要點如下：

1. 多讀多寫；2. 合理安排時間；3. 其他方式（自擬）。

注意：1. 詞數100左右，開頭與結尾已給出，不計入總詞數；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear friends,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

I’d like to share my own learning experience with you, as I hope it can be useful to you.

First of all, do more reading and writing. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned. Besides, make a reasonable study schedule. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well. In order not to be tired, I have been actively taking part in after- school activities. By doing so, I can spare time to develop a strong social ability. Last but not least, I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

In a word, just remember that developing your own learning style is the best.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，分享平時的學習方式。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

人稱：第一人稱

時態(tài)：根據提示，時態(tài)應為一般現在時

結構：總分總法

要點：

1. 多讀多寫；2. 合理安排時間；3. 其他方式（自擬）。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

be useful to；reading and writing；the key to；make good use of；reasonable；study schedule；relaxation；take part in；after- school activities；spare time to do sth.；social ability；prefer；chance；succeed in doing；learning style；In a word；as well等

第三步：連詞成句

1. I’d like to share my own learning experience with you

2. Reading is the key to opening your eyes, while writing is a helpful way to make good use of what you have learned.

3. Though study comes first, you need relaxation as well.

4. I have been actively taking part in after- school activities.

5. I can spare time to develop a strong social ability.

6. I prefer studying by myself, which gives me the chance to succeed in solving hard problems.

7. Developing your own learning style is the best.

根據提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表文章結構順序：First of all；Last but not least；

2.表并列補充關系：Besides；and；

3.表轉折對比關系：Though；while+從句；

4.表因果關系：so；as等

連句成文，注意使用恰當的連詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改