Question

【題目】此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（﹨）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（__），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。

2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

It appears that people don't need any phone box now. In a small British village, people decided to turn a red phone box into a library a few years before. Now, the phone box is one of the country’s smaller libraries. About 150 books placed on shelves in the phone box. Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchange. They can use the library around a clock so it opens 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. Since the library opens its bright door, people from all parts of the village have paid it a visit. Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighbourhood, children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late at night. It is convenient for them to use such a wonderful library.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】box改為boxes

【2】before改為ago

【3】smaller改為smallest

【4】加are

【5】for改為in

【6】a改為the

【7】so改為because/since/as

【8】opens改為opened

【9】it改為them

【10】去掉are

【解析】

試題分析：短文改錯題。

【1】box改為boxes；第一句It appears that people don't need any phone box now. box為可數(shù)名詞，前面又有any修飾，需變?yōu)閺?fù)數(shù)。故box改為boxes

【2】before改為ago；第二句In a small British village, people decided to turn a red phone box into a library a few years before.。a few years before用在完成時結(jié)構(gòu)中，a few years ago用在過去時結(jié)構(gòu)中。故before改為ago

【3】smaller改為smallest；第三句Now, the phone box is one of the country’s smaller libraries。one of后面要接形容詞的最高級。故smaller改為smallest

【4】加are；第四句About 150 books placed on shelves in the phone box。書與放置之間是被動的含義，因此本句應(yīng)用被動結(jié)構(gòu)be+done。故加are

【5】for改為in；第五句Villagers there can take whatever they want and leave their own books for exchange。in exchange (for)“作為（對……）的交換”是固定搭配。故for改為in

【6】a改為the；第六句They can use the library around a clock so it opens 365 days a year and 24 hours a day. around the clock“晝夜不停；連續(xù)一整天”是固定搭配。故a改為the

【7】so改為because/since/as；第六句They can use the library around a clock so it opens 365 days a year and 24 hours a day。句意：因為它一年365天，每天24小時都開放，所以他們能晝夜不停地使用圖書館。從句表示原因，主句表示結(jié)果。故so改為because/since/as

【8】opens改為opened；第七句Since the library opens its bright door,people from all parts of the village have paid it a visit. since引導(dǎo)的從句分兩種情況：從句是過去時，主句用現(xiàn)在完成時；從句是過去完成時，主句用過去時。本句的主句是現(xiàn)在完成時，所以從句用過去時。故opens改為opened

【9】it改為them；第八句前半句Among it there're senior citizens living in the neighbourhood, 這里的代詞是指代前面people from all parts of the village，是復(fù)數(shù)結(jié)構(gòu)。故it改為them

【10】去掉are；第八句后半句children getting off school buses and university students are stopping by late

at night。本句是用and連接的兩個并列結(jié)構(gòu)，因此與前面children getting off school buses結(jié)構(gòu)要對等，用現(xiàn)在分詞做后置定語。故去掉are