Question

假如你是李華，一位18歲的男孩，英語成績非常突出，有兩年英語家教的經(jīng)驗，現(xiàn)在是學(xué)�！皭坌木銟凡俊钡某蓡T，認為志愿工作能夠使人樹立信心，培養(yǎng)良好的交際技能�？吹较旅孢@則招聘信息，你愿意利用這次機會，為需要幫助的兒童獻出自己的微薄之力，同時增長見識，了解社會。

請根據(jù)所給中、英文提示完成下面的英文郵件。

注意：1．110詞左右。

2．郵件開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫出，不計入總數(shù)。 

3．可適當增加細節(jié)，使行文連貫。

提示詞：tutor vt. & n. 家教         Loving Heart Club 愛心俱樂部

Dear Student Union,

I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five．Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity．

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I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ 163.com,

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Student Union,

I have just read the ad on the school bulletin and the moment I saw it I took an interest in becoming one of the volunteer English teachers of the five．Now I’m writing here to apply for this opportunity．

I am Li Hua, a body of 18, and I have a good command of English. For tow years I have been tutoring two kids in English Presently I work as a member of Loving Heart Club in our school. Voluntary work has helped me build confidence and good communication skills.

In my opinion, being a volunteer teacher at the SOS village is obviously more than just teaching; furthermore, it is helpful to broaden our horizons and improve our understanding of the world. That’s why I’d like very much to take this opportunity and make the most of my special talents and interests. By helping those kids, I feel I can make a big difference to their future and make a small contribution to society．

I’d appreciate it so much if you could possibly consider my application. I’m looking forward to your early reply and please email me at lihua@ 163.com,

Yours sincerely,

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文，需要寫的要點已經(jīng)給出，但是寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文，一定要談?wù)勛约旱目捶�。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意要求的字數(shù)，不要太多也不要太少。

考點：提綱類作文

點評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等。