【題目】假設(shè)你叫李華,你們學(xué)校最近做了一項(xiàng)調(diào)查,調(diào)查的主題是“你暑假會(huì)去打零工掙錢(qián)嗎?”請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面的調(diào)查結(jié)果寫(xiě)一份總結(jié),開(kāi)頭已給出。

結(jié)果

原因

89%選擇不去

1.父母不允許

2.學(xué)習(xí)太忙,沒(méi)時(shí)間

3.不知道自己能做什么工作

11%選擇去

1.學(xué)以致用

2.積累社會(huì)經(jīng)驗(yàn)

3.減輕父母的壓力

注意:

1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫。

2. 詞數(shù)100左右。

Recently, our school carried out a survey about whether ...

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【答案】

Recently, our school carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time work during the summer holiday.

89% of the students said no. First, their parents won’t allow them to do so. Second, they are so busy with their study during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it. Third, they are not sure what job they can do.

11% of the students planned to work during the winter holiday. They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice. Through working, they can gain lots of social experience. In addition, by doing a part-time job to earn some money, they can reduce their parents burden.

【解析】

試題分析:本文是提綱類寫(xiě)作,要點(diǎn)已給出。寫(xiě)作時(shí)不要逐句翻譯,可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫同時(shí)要把所提示的點(diǎn)寫(xiě)全,語(yǔ)句通順,同時(shí)要注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)、上下文意思連貫,符合邏輯關(guān)系。根據(jù)句意適當(dāng)使用并列連詞,同時(shí)也要合理運(yùn)用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句子為文章增色添彩。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】

本文是一份調(diào)查結(jié)果,采用三段式,語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練,層次分明,布局合理,運(yùn)用高級(jí)句子。Recently, our school carried out a survey about whether students will do some part-time work during the summer holiday.句中運(yùn)用介詞的賓語(yǔ)從句;Second, they are so busy with their study during the holiday that they can’t afford the time to do it.結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句用在句中;They think working is a good chance to put what they have learned into practice.一句使用兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句,堪稱經(jīng)典;另外,F(xiàn)irst, Second, Third, Through working, In addition的運(yùn)用為文章增色添彩。

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