Question

17．目前出國(guó)旅游很熱門，假設(shè)你是某高中學(xué)生李華，你的朋友Lily計(jì)劃假期出國(guó)旅游，希望你能給予她一些建議．請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫一篇電子郵件回復(fù)她．
要點(diǎn)如下：
1．旅游中出現(xiàn)的一些不文明現(xiàn)象．
2．你的建議．
注意1．詞數(shù)在100左右，
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：吐痰 spit；樹立形象 uphold an image．

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
該句使用了兩個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，第一個(gè)as引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；第二個(gè)which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句，修飾整個(gè)句子；
（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．
that引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句，在賓語(yǔ)從句中還使用了 It is 名詞 to do的句型；此外還有which引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句；
高級(jí)詞匯：do great harm to對(duì)…造成傷害； keep in mind 牢記；responsibility責(zé)任；
連接過(guò)渡詞：to begin with首先；What's more表示遞進(jìn)；

解答 Dear lily，
   I am so glad to receive your letter telling me you will go on an overseas trip，here are my suggestions．
   （高分句型一）As we know，with more and more Chinese going on overseas trips，some of them shout loudly，litter or spit in public，which has done great harm to our good reputation．（列舉旅游中不文明現(xiàn)象）Therefore，to begin with，（建議一）you have to understand and respect foreign cultures，so as to get along well．And before you start your overseas trip，（建議二）remember to learn about the culture and custom there．What's more，（建議三）wherever you go you need to protect the enviroment．In this way，you'll win respect for yourself as well as our country．（高分句型二）Finally，you should always keep in mind that it is everyone's responsibility to unhold image of our motherland．
    I do wish you have a good time!
Yours friend
Lihua

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