【題目】請以“A Great Disaster”為題，介紹2004年12月26日上午8點左右發(fā)生在亞洲國家的由印度洋的大地震引發(fā)的海嘯，內(nèi)容包括以下要點：

1、海嘯發(fā)生的時間

2、受災(zāi)國家: Indonesia, Thailand, Sri Lanka 等國家

3、死亡人數(shù)：28萬人；另有數(shù)百萬人無家可歸

4、中國及時輸送錢、食品和醫(yī)藥，并派救護隊救護傷員

5、受災(zāi)國人民重建家園

［寫作要求］1）只能用5個句子介紹全部所給的內(nèi)容；

2）將5個句子組成連貫的短文。

［評分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)］ 句子結(jié)構(gòu)準(zhǔn)確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

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【答案】At about 8:00 a.m. on December 26, 2004, some Asian countries such as Indonesia, Thailand and Sri Landka were shaken by a terrible tsunami caused by the Indian Ocean earthquake. The huge waves suddenly destroyed a great many buildings, which made millions of people homeless. What’s worse, more than 280,000 people were killed, and a lot of people were injured in the tsunami. People in the tsunami-ravaged countries were in great need of help, so on hearing the bad news, China and many other countries not only supplied money, food, medicine, etc, but also sent rescue teams to help the injured and the sick there. People in these countries tried to rebuild their homes with the help of their government and other countries.

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于記敘文，介紹由印度洋的大地震引發(fā)的海嘯受災(zāi)情況。

第一步：

審題：記敘文 介紹由印度洋的大地震引發(fā)的海嘯受災(zāi)情況

人稱：第三人稱

時態(tài)：一般過去時

結(jié)構(gòu)：全文為一部分，介紹海嘯發(fā)生的時間、受災(zāi)國家、死亡人數(shù)、無家可歸人數(shù)、

其他國家的援助情況、災(zāi)后重建情況等。

要點：

1、海嘯發(fā)生的時間

2、受災(zāi)國家：Indonesia, Thailand, Sri Lanka 等國家

3、死亡人數(shù)：28萬人；無家可歸人數(shù)：數(shù)百萬人

4、中國和其他國家援助情況：及時輸送錢、食品和醫(yī)藥，并派救護隊救護傷員

5、受災(zāi)國人民重建家園

第二步：列提綱（重點詞匯、短語 ）

at about 8:00 a.m. on December 26, 2004；such as；be shaken by；cause；destroy；a great many ；millions of ；make people homeless；be killed；be injured ；in great need of ；supply；rescue teams；the injured and the sick；rebuild homes；with the help of

第三步：連詞成句

(1) At about 8:00 a.m. on December 26, 2004, some Asian countries were shaken by a terrible tsunami.

(2) The terrible tsunami was caused by the Indian Ocean earthquake.

(3) The huge waves destroyed a great many buildings.

(4) It made millions of people homeless.

(5)More than 280,000 people were killed.

(6) A lot of people were injured in the tsunami.

(7) People were in great need of help.

(8) When China and many other countries heard the bad news, they supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

(9) They also sent rescue teams to help the injured and the sick there.

(10) People tried to rebuild their homes with the help of their government and other countries.

根據(jù)提示和關(guān)鍵詞進行遣詞造句，適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用句型，注意時態(tài)和主謂一致問題。

第四步：連句成篇(銜接詞、亮點詞匯)

用過去分詞短語作后置定語連接下面連個句子

(1) At about 8:00 a.m. on December 26, 2004, some Asian countries were shaken by a terrible tsunami.

(2) The terrible tsunami was caused by the Indian Ocean earthquake.

→At about 8:00 a.m. on December 26, 2004, some Asian countries were shaken by a terrible tsunami caused by the Indian Ocean earthquake.

用which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句連接下面兩個句子

(3)The huge waves destroyed a great many buildings.

(4) It made millions of people homeless.

→(3)The huge waves destroyed a great many buildings，which made millions of people homeless.

用表示“一……就”的句式表達下面的句子

(8) When China and many other countries heard the bad news, they supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

→On hearing the bad news, China and many other countries supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

→The moment / minute China and many other countries heard the bad news, they supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

→As soon as China and many other countries heard the bad news, they supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

用not only… but also 連接下面的連個句子

(8) When China and many other countries heard the bad news, they supplied money, food, medicine, etc.

(9) They also sent rescue teams to help the injured and the sick there.

→On hearing the bad news, China and many other countries not only supplied money, food, medicine, etc , but also sent rescue teams to help the injured and the sick there.

適當(dāng)?shù)剡\用高級詞匯、復(fù)雜句式提升文章的檔次 ，增加文章的可讀性。

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